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Wandering Pigeon
I came here to eat breadcrumbs and indiscriminately shit on cars. And I'm all out of breadcrumbs...
Wandering Pigeon
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Loved it!
scary though.
Cant wait to see what happens 
I do hope you left this incomplete on purpose so we can see where this goes.
7919904 Oh absolutely. I've got a couple of chapters planned for this.
7919830 Would you say it's... spoopy?
7919913 Sweet! Looking forward to more!
This is by far the most interesting take on Nightmare Moon. Stay awesome!
Most entertaining diaper related fic to come out in a while.
Nice job, cant wait for more.
So, I'm certainly interested in reading more of this. It's an idea I've played with a few times but never felt confident enough to follow through on, so it's nice to see someone else realizing it.
Mechanically, solid as ever. I didn't notice much in the way of grammar or punctuation that I found issue with (beyond subjective flow preferences). That said, your synopsis should have 'decides', not 'decided', to maintain tense with the rest of it. Your first impression is the most important, after all.
Stylistically, an improvement on your previous works. Personification is used effectively for the castle and there's some solid juxtaposition ("a familiar stranger" comes to mind), but more in the way of similes and metaphors would have helped establish mood and strengthened the mental picture of the story.
Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. May your quill stay sharp and your ink never dry.
7920701 I will. Thanks for reading.
7921102 Hope I can continue to please.
7921468 Glad you're liking it so far. Hopefully I can keep up the quality. I'll also try to be on the look out for any other grammatical errors, but thanks for catching what you did.
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Welcome. I didn't read it with a critical eye, so there might be some things I missed. I always pay attention to the synopsis though, since it's the best gauge for an author's capability; If it's chock full of errors in little more than a paragraph, on what should be the most polished part of their presentation, then odds are the story itself isn't that good.
Please tell me there will be a happy ending.
7922190 Well, there's probably not going to not be an unhappy ending.
Wonder what will happen if Nightmare Moon actually manages to take Luna out diapered?
Owwwww ......... I hope Luna does not have to get spanked any more. Or have vegetable foal food either
Why hate on vegetables lol
7923015 Boy, wouldn't that be humiliating.
7923057 I think she may catch a break. For now.
7923736 Vegetables are all well and good. Vegetable flavored foal food? You don't wanna touch that stuff.
For the last couple of minutes I have been checking to see if a new chapter has been released. It's safe to say that I am hooked on this.
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True true
A long desperation and humiliation chapter with a full diaper at thr end. You never disappoint
Ooh, my!
7924949 I try not to
Glad you liked it.
Over already? I was hoping for more.
7925100 I may continue this story later with some elements of an expanded alternate universe where Nightmare forces everypony to wear diapers, but that would take a lot of work and distract from the other projects I want to do, so I don't know when, or if, that would be made.
Though, if any writers out there want to use this AU that I've created, they're more than welcome to as well.
Loved it, I can't wait to see more of this story soon
Things are starting to pick up here. Personally, I'm looking forward to Celestia getting the same treatment (if that's what you have planned), although I'm also holding out hope for a Diaper Dictatorship of sorts (or at least the main six getting the treatment as well). That said, speaking on a personal preference level, I hope Nightmare mellows out a bit; I know domination and punishment are central themes here, but I've always enjoyed the idea of a character being forced into diapers and begrudgingly enjoying it. Nightmare's treatment, though, forms a barrier to a character (logically) forming that desire.
Anyways, I do have to comment on the grammar. Perhaps I have a more critical eye this time around, but there seems to be quite a few more typos in this chapter than previous ones. They weren't awful, but a quick browse could probably tidy things up a bit.
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Wait, really? I do have to say, the current 'end' is remarkably abrupt, considering just how much buildup there is to, well, more. The fact that I and several other commenters are wondering what's going to happen next is a pretty clear indication of this, I feel. As it is, the current ending is... underwhelming. It feels like you've only scratched the surface of the story and haven't achieved a satisfying climax yet (take that as you will). I do sincerely hope you continue this, at least insofar as Celestia, who is necessary for things to be properly concluded, I feel.
Also, that chapter title.
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7925936 Did a once-over for grammar mistakes, so hopefully they're few and far between now.
As for the ending of this story, yeah, I understand where you're coming from completely. To be honest, I really do want to work on this story more and flesh out a world where Nightmare rules through diapers, but it's just like I said: I'm worried about it taking away time from other projects.
But, since you and others have been asking for more, and because I really want to, I will at least try to write out one more chapter for this story to show what would happen when Celestia finally shows up. Anything else beyond that would need to wait for the potential sequel, but hopefully one more chapter will make the ending more satisfying and less abrupt.
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Most agreeable.
And I certainly look forward to things being given a little more page space to conclude.
What other projects might these be?
7927395 A couple of one-shots and another multi-chapter fic or two. I've got a lot of ideas, just gotta work on writing them down.
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I know the feeling :P
I'm rather partial to the idea myself that the only ponies she keeps padded are the Princesses. Sort of a living reminder of 'This is what I did to your rulers, now behave or you don't want to find out what I can do to you'.
Doing it to everypony, while amusing in concept, seems to weaken the humiliation factor somewhat, because Luna (And Celestia, if she shows up and loses) are no longer unique in that regard; whereas if they are made to be the only two (Or four, if one adds Twilight and Cadance. It's not like Flurry counts here since she's a literal baby), then the humiliation factor remains much more potent!
Love it. Best diaper related fic I've read in a while.
Luna is a bit meek, but I guess it makes sense, she if anyone is intimately familiar with the power and malice of NMM. For a fic of this type, it's also unusually dark. Like Luna, I keep desperately hoping that there will be some light at the end of the tunnel, that Celestia will somehow manage to defeat NMM, or that Luna will wake up from a bad dream, or something.
Is that a reference?
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Not to my knowledge
7939984
Princess pottypants is the name of the largest writer of ABDL porn on the net right now.
7940098 Ah, I see.
I rarely look beyond Fimfic, so I had no idea about them. Guess it was just an accident.
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though I think "Porn" is a little pushing it. There is no intercourse and never any sexual contact. It's purely fetish. I actually think you would like it as her writing style is quite similar to yours.
This was a great fic, I really loved it I hope you will be able to get around to make a sequel for this.
7953900 I hope so too. Glad you enjoyed.
Well, there's still the possibility of Shining Armor and Cadence, right? Surely Cadence at least will know something is up when the sun and moon don't rise as they should, won't she?
7954082 A tale for the sequel, once I can get around to it.
It was written quite well
I love this story so much. It's probably my top favorite now.
there needs to be more like this
this is definitely my favorite of your stories, although it is your darkest.
hopefully you can give it a sequel someday, buti understand that it's been long enough that you might not have the imspiration for contimuing this one anymore
As a devoted reader and respecting this play, I can't help but admire it! Everything is worked out to the smallest detail! It is immediately clear that a real expert worked! Please try to write a sequel, I can't help but leave everything as it is at the moment! I would really like to know what will happen next!
I have reread it more than a dozen times in the hope that I will be able to write a sequel for myself, but unfortunately, the work of the "author" is like heaven to me!