Queen Chrysalis, ruler of the changelings, is in trouble.
After the failed Canterlot attack, not only has she been forced to trade all the ponies she collected for the safe return of her subjects, but she is also about to be forced into signing treaties of peace that will leave her race crippled.
A strange creature is found trapped deep in the old hives, will it help the changelings rise again, or be the final nail in the coffin for the pride-blinded queen.
Sex tag for all of that juicy innuendo and passing references to sexual acts that any good changeling loves.
Takes place shortly after the wedding, no gak deer with wings here.
Chapters (8)
First.
Beware, beware!
The head-cannon-lings are strong in this story!
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Your head cannon lings are probably the best I have seen on this site. I am eagerly waiting for more.
As a certain somepony has been bugging me about this for the past week non stop (you know who you are), minor spoilers: no, I have no plans on turning my human-changeling hybrid into a super powerful magic user that can solve everything using magic. Also you should be more patient.
Heh. 'bugging'...
Sorry.
Heh some one got lucky and I hope you will have some backstory for her(not even going to try to spell the name) and the changelings also some more would be nice but I'm just a reader any way great story can't wait for another update
7846387 This story is and will stay firmly a slice of life meaning I will do plenty (read: far too much) background and character development.
I hope to use what I write here in my future changeling stories so I'll eventually need to write out basically every little detail there is to my changelings within this story. I expect it to ruin several people's head-cannon.
so...is the main character actually a girl...or is it a guy who thinks hes a girl...or both?
I liked the part where they had an orgy.
7846829 Remember when she was in the pod and first noticed her green torso band? She said she used to have "a modest chest." I'm pretty sure that means boobs, thus female.
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Considering the nature of changelings, the question of current gender is irrelevant. But it sounds like changelings got their hooves on a woman, found out she wasn't generating much love and stuck her in a prototype pod... and like a typical jar of homemade preserve, was promptly lost and forgotten in the depths of the pantry.
I do wonder what makes Chrysalis the queen and how that will keep her in power when this gangly giant of an upstart becomes the hive's Goddess of Food? She's far nicer and those boops are to die for.
Whoops, she's only a few days old and already broke a changeling. Achievement unlocked!
This new wrinkle is making me wonder if Luna's dream magic could potentially allow Sweet to explore the hidden recesses of her mind in a somewhat guided mode. This is assuming there's anything to find beyond a moldy cardboard box kicked all the way to the back of the darkest deepest closet, filled with stacks of ye'olde Kodak slides-- images of what was with no connotations attached.
As for her current line of thought, I can see nothing bad happening at all when Sweet asks Chrysalis if she can just pop on down to the castle to have a nice cup of tea and a chat with the Princesses. Golly gee Sweet, why not take a few drones too? I'm certain they would enjoy
casing the joint for a future invasiona totally innocent sightseeing tour with you.7851778 Well if posting more chapters garners more of these fun comments from you, how ever will I stay away from the keyboard!
You will be the end of me, think of the children!
You should think of adding this to some groups.
Hmm, an interesting start, though I hope the changelings are already working on changing to make the detection spell useless.
Flash Sentry needs to be repeatedly bucked in the groin.
Go Chryssie go!
Orgy time, yay!
Ah, the universal greeting.
Huh, well, that's a good start. And I too think that changelings ate the cutest thing ever. Real changelings, not the baby crayon barf ones.
Welp, that was quick. *plays 70s porn music*
Go away, Luna, you're running everything.
Welp, Whispy's broken.
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Miniature bug horse pace belongs on the far right lane!
Hmm, did M'iaq impersonate a certain cat-people before getting caught by the ponies?
I'd demand hazard pay too if I had to take sprayed coffee to the face!
7907457 I'm good at coming up with origami characters. That's what the OC tag is for. Origami Characters. Yep.
I thought I'd try my hoof (ha!) at some non dirty humour for once, but couldn't stop myself from sprinkling innuendo all through the chapter. Again.
I need to work on my non-dirty humour.
m'aiq.... fucking m'aiq
Huh, why am I suddenly thinking of Elsweyr...?
Ah, good to see that holding a grudge is completely beneath Celestia. *sage nod*
... THE LINK ONE IS COMING, RUN!
The mental image of Maline leaving a trail of unconscious changelings with dopey smiles, drooling in their sleep, wherever she goes is surprisingly cute and hilarious.
Wow, she's really changing the changelings. Not a surprise, seeing as she suddenly completely eliminated what they used to have to spend most of their time and resources for to survive.
... Should've gone with Casa de Maline.
7908379 Yea, made me laugh when i noticed it too.
Wow great story please keep up the good work update more soon please I wounder what will happen next
It's still pretty nice. Poor Torrence, though.
The mental image of an the dazed Cutelings is incredibly adorable and hilarious at the same time.
Poor Chryssie. Paperwork. Paperwork never changes... She should really distribute the work to shine assistants.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
I thought his name was Typo
I do not see an anthro tag.
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His name changes every time, thus his name IS a typo.
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Bureaucracy, the bane of all leaders. Chrysalis might have to wave an olive branch (no! no hitting!) to the Princesses and ask how they managed to deal with the endless paperwork? At the very least, it'll give her an excuse to send in changeling spies to steal the secrets from Marshmallowflanks- er, Celestia. Actually, that sounds like a much more fun changeling idea.
I wonder... would all the changelings switch to whatever language Maline speaks if she asked one to so she could understand them? I'm pretty sure they'd be falling over themselves to keep her happy and pleased considering she is their own Goddess of Food. The pink Princess of Food can go hit the road, the changelings have an upgrade! Heh.
Also, RD should know better than to question Pinkie's ability to craft such a perfect disguise that it makes changelings question their own selves.
p.s. I wonder how Maline would react to the Princesses? Would she want to play with their ethereal manes and tails? Do ponies also flop over
deadhappy when booped? How do steamy bubble baths compare to the warm goo of her cocoon? Could Celestia tempt Maline with cake? What's Maline's opinion on the more commonly served teas at the castle? Is Maline a cheap drunk or able to drink even Luna under the table when she gets her hands on some pony booze? Would this lead to finding Maline and Luna in an awkward tangled mess at a later time while sleeping off said epic drunken revelry? So many questions to be explored!THIS STORY IS NOW ONE OF MY FAVORITE I'VE EVER READ JUST BECAUSE OF M'iaq the lyer being in the story!!!!!
I love this story, when will the next update be?
8060315 Whenever people stop witting such enthralling stories.
I swear, every night it's the same thing: "I'll just read one more chapter before writing some more of my stories."
Six weeks later and I've only made it half way through the next chapter, even though it only takes like, an hour or two for such short chapter lengths.
Between that, and my as-of-yet unpublished insane mature story with much longer chapter lengths, my writing couldn't be much slower if I tried.
8060725 I know exactly how you feel tbh, I tried as hard as I could to not read all of this in one go but my struggle was in vain
8060812 You know it's bad when your word tracker says you've read several million words in a few weeks. Mathematically, I've read more horse words in the past three months than there are seconds in the past three months.
8060817 I didn't even know they had a tracker, now I'm afraid to look at mine
8060819 Hah! I wish they had a word tracker. That way I could quantify the life as it drains from my body.
Nah, I call it "my word tracker" to be fancy, it's just an excel sheet with my list of fully read stories and an addition function tacked onto the end.
8063092 that pretty cool, I just know I've spent to much time on here but I don't really care since it's fun
8063092 since I was just checking up to see if there was another chapter I realized I forgot about the thing at the beginning.
Liarra, are you a duck?
8079563 No.
8079680 wow, that's hilarious
when are you going to update?
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WTF!
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WTF 2.0!
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god damnit, please end me for i have made a stupid mistake, a horribly stupid mistake.
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I'm apparently viewer number 666.
Instantly got me in my "gotta read!" mode.
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Seriously?
When I read that horribly misspelled name, I instantly got the reference.