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LegionofPony
I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.
LegionofPony
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He pound, he came.......... then he knocks them up!!! ^w^
...Pound is a BOSS. That is all.
While I am enjoying what I'm reading, another editing session would do this story good. Feels a bit rushed.
8298769 ...right.
8298882 Heh.
8298986 It’s rushed because the commissioner had a firmly set amount of words he wanted while also demanding top-quality details, and extensive edit requests wanting me to add even MORE detail. Even as it is, I went 1.1k words over the 10k he paid for, at my own cost, and needed to finish it up.
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Ah, that explains it.
I loved this story. Only details you missed is what race all the babies are.
8299356 May as well add that...as well as that this story is actually completed.
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Thank you very much.
...To prevent your mother from having more foals, Flurry. Also, it's not a balloon - and nopony wants to see them, outside of a very specific situation; Pinkie would not be happy with this 'balloon', for example.
Lmao it's called hotdogging
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Ah, its called that with two females as well? Thought that was only with one. Thanks for the info though, I'll change it soon.
I seriously misread that as Frostmourne for a bit.
Shouldn't there be a semicolon or a comma between 'other's' and 'both'?
So...did Pound, Pumpkin and Flurry ever tell their parents (and Pinkie) that their pregnancies were completely accidental? First Pound and Pumpkin collided in a game of tag, causing Pound to discover that fillies (and mares) don't have 'sheathes'. This was followed by impromptu exploration of the two different set of reproductive organs, until the smells overwhelmed their rational minds.
It wasn't like the trio even knew what this was, until said adults returned.
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I had thought of that, but hotdogging generally refers to between the butt cheeks.
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Hm...... wonder where that name came from....
That pediatrician should be fired.
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Yes but it's a pretty broad term.
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Lmao made my day
8299961 WoW lore.
8300067 I added that clarification. Thanks
8300577 No idea...
8300855 Horses work a lot different than humans do, as do most animals. Specifically, most horse mares are actually bred at age four. Many species’ females are capable of successful breeding and birthing by age two, and males are virile at two to four years of age. So, the pediatrician would be completely wrong for a human of the same age, who don’t sexually mature until 8~14 y/o or so, but a pony? Perhaps not.
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I would have been perfectly fine if you said, "it's just a silly story, logic need not apply", but since you're trying to justify it I will have to argue a bit. Age means nothing when comparing animals. What really matters is relative maturity. Those animals that birth at such young ages are actually the equivalents to sexually mature teenagers for humans. The fillies in your story are the equivalent to children around eight years old. Maybe younger given their language (don't remember their ages in the fic). No matter the species, giving birth at the relative age of eight is more risky than giving birth at the relative age of eighteen. No exceptions (well, okay, there are exceptions, but that wouldn't sound as good, would it?).
Since it's rare for any children of a species to be fertile at such a relative age anyway, it's pretty much just porn logic. Which is fine until you try to justify it as if it's realistic.
Cuties!
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One more thing: I'm not a veterinarian or anything, but reading That Night in the Bass-ment (a pretty good Rarity/OC clop story) made me aware of the fact that mares can undergo self-abortion (in our world of non-sentient equines, this is to ensure the foals don't get killed if the lead stallion is replaced, as said new lead stallion would want his genes passed on, not those of his predecessor).
If the parents didn't want their daughters to keep their foals, they could've just had the fillies undergo that self-abortion process, instead of having to undergo a ponyfied version of human abortion, which I, as a 19-year-old male who's never been that interested in having a girlfriend, have no clue what it involves.
Just thought I'd point that out.
My goodness... These fillies are going to get pregnant... I wonder if it's dangerous for them this young to have a foal?
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I personally view Pound and Pumpkin being ~12 in this story, and Flurry about 10, at which age colts become sexually mature and fillies start going into heat; according to EquiMed, Terra (our human earth’s) fillies reach sexual maturity at 12-15 months, while Terra Colts have to be at least 15 months old to be considered 'sexually mature'. This would be about the equivilant age if Equestria’s ponies age the same rate as humans (if a bit faster at their first years in my headcanon, in that they can talk imperfectly by age 1 and are able to communicate with body language since birth like real-life horses).
This is true but, again, they are sexually mature at 10-12. Is it safe for a human girl to give birth at age 12? Not as safe as a fully matured adult, no. Is it possible? Yeah. For that matter, is it possible for a girl of 8 to give birth? I’ve heard of a 7-year-old successfully, naturally birthing a child, so yeah.
Besides that, equine reproductive anatomy is significantly different than human as you probably well know. Mares are designed to stretch significantly ‘in there’, even more than humans, as well as Flurry’s being explained in-story as ‘magically aided’. But, again, ponies =/= humans.
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indeed.
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I know that fact; I also wrote that story. Yeah, self-abortion is a thing in equines, but the parents didn’t want the fillies to self-abort the foals given they were physically mature enough to carry them safely, and both fillies wanted to keep them.
In pre-fetal human abortions, generally, they use a vacuum to suck the embryo and everything else in the womb out through the cervix, then dispose of it. Then there’s fetal abortions, but that’s just...too horrible for me to describe...
8303201 Feel free to read the above and below discussions regarding that.
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...Well, hey, at least you know I like your stories, right?
I really like that stuff, happy sex with foals and pregnancy, that is just it :D please keep up the good work :)
a vary good short story.
and a super good read.
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I'm happy you both enjoyed my writing! Thanks for the kind words.
Go to Featherweight's page on thatpervert.com, scroll down to the second picture and look at what was happening with Pipskueak, Twilight, and Luna.
Here's a link.
Considering that Pumpkin is a unicorn and Flurry is a bucking alicorn, I'm surprised neither of them thought to use a spell like that one.
Am I the only one who would scream "abortion" if I was in Pound's shoes? 2 kids at the age of 11?
fuck dat shit! hell, i might even leg it 
Dose that makes me a cunt?
8321722 The commissioner, nor I, were interested in doing anything magical like that. Just simple, fumbling stuff
8325060 The commissioner, nor I, wanted to bring the epic hellstorm of negitive comments and downvotes that even fictional abortions can bring. Besides that, I love seeing the mares/fillies getting pregnant in the end and having a happy family.
I wonder if Alicorns are a True Breeding race. I guess we'll probably never know canonically.
Heh, you know Pinkie knew all along what was happening.
and even then, parents fault for not teaching it in the first place. Blame all over the place. But Equestria is Equestria we suppose...
8330992 Clearly not, as Shining is a unicorn and Cadence is an alicorn. They're also OK with, at least in my story, Flurry and Pumpkin being allowed to have Pound's foals and later are in a herd together so there's that.
8333475 Parents are to blame for not being more private and Pinkie's to blame for falling asleep while watching them. Overall though, it ended up well in the end.
8333553
Agreed
Well this was a very good story. Pound had a guys dream, but ended up with at least two foals. All he can say in his mind is "Fuck."
8334057 Well, he not only got laid by two young mares sequentially, he then ended up with not only two foals, but also two lifelong lovers and mates. So, in my eyes, that's a win-win.
8333553
Have Shining and Cadence had a non-Alicorn kid I haven't heard of yet? The only kid we've canonically seen from a relationship involving at least one Alicorn is Flurry who is an Alicorn. A single data point isn't enough to PROVE that Alicorns are True Breeding but Flurry certainly doesn't prove otherwise.
A True Breeding race is one that when they mate with another race that's not a True Breeding race every single child will be of the True Breeding race.
8335139 Ooooh, I misunderstood. I though you meant true breeding as in Alicorns would only be in a relationship and mate with other with Alicorns.
On that note it would make sense that Alicorns only produce Alicorns no matter the sperm donor's race, given their rarity. Perhaps their race-deciding genetics basically overpower any other race's, making the foal always be an Alicorn.
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True...well still very well done story. Im favoriting this so its says in my archives.
pronking
8400992
Yep, it's a real thing that horses, sheep, and goats do!
I'm loving this so far I can't wait to see what happens next.
OMG there's a threeway on the way ,and they both may be in heat.
That was awesome &epic go Pound he showed them what his name really means.
That was so epic/awesome to read with a matching ending.
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8563001 I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. Thanks for reading the sequel too!