8298986 It’s rushed because the commissioner had a firmly set amount of words he wanted while also demanding top-quality details, and extensive edit requests wanting me to add even MORE detail. Even as it is, I went 1.1k words over the 10k he paid for, at my own cost, and needed to finish it up.
Go to Featherweight's page on thatpervert.com, scroll down to the second picture and look at what was happening with Pipskueak, Twilight, and Luna. Here's a link.
Considering that Pumpkin is a unicorn and Flurry is a bucking alicorn, I'm surprised neither of them thought to use a spell like that one.
He pound, he came.......... then he knocks them up!!! ^w^
...Pound is a BOSS. That is all.
8298769 ...right.
8298882 Heh.
8298986 It’s rushed because the commissioner had a firmly set amount of words he wanted while also demanding top-quality details, and extensive edit requests wanting me to add even MORE detail. Even as it is, I went 1.1k words over the 10k he paid for, at my own cost, and needed to finish it up.
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Ah, that explains it.
Shouldn't there be a semicolon or a comma between 'other's' and 'both'?
Go to Featherweight's page on thatpervert.com, scroll down to the second picture and look at what was happening with Pipskueak, Twilight, and Luna.
Here's a link.
Considering that Pumpkin is a unicorn and Flurry is a bucking alicorn, I'm surprised neither of them thought to use a spell like that one.
Heh, you know Pinkie knew all along what was happening.
That was awesome &epic go Pound he showed them what his name really means.