Love can be a small tiny gust of wind or the most powerful force in the universe. Twilight and Applejack have been given a golden opportunity to explore these new feelings. A simple mistake will finally open one of their eyes to something amazing. Watch as as the two form a love strong enough that it wont only conquer time, it may even cheat death.
A shout out to my editor General Tullius
This is my entry to a Twijack contest please enjoy
artwork by AwesomeSauce78 here is his Deviantart
What a nice start to a story! I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter
7780676 thanks should be up later today
7780715 Awesome
This is adorable! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Well, so far it isn't bad. Not sure if I should follow this story though.
7780733 Thanks I think you will enjoy the future adorableness
This looks cute. Tracking.
Good so far. I'm ready for more!
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I'm glad you guys like it
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i agree
7780813 well thats up to you but thanks for the comment
Wait what? A new chapter every day? Woah there buddy, slow down. It's not like this story is going to go anywhere if you don't update it constantly. Take your time and focus on writing it as best as you can. Don't want you to go brain-dead after just a few days. (Unless you have them stock-piled up, then just ignore this comment.)
7782273 i will try not to go brain dead but i have 4 chaps just needing to be typed
I just love the daily chapters!
...And that this chapter was super cute didn't hurt either
Keep up the good work!
Lovely chapter looking forward to the next
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glad to hear you both like it
That last scene was soooo adorable! Keep up the good work, though you might want to consider getting an editor.
7784517 thanks, I have a editor I'll ask him too look into it agian
7786698 it was yours but my editor seems to have disappeared might not make it
7787127 its cool it gave me the idea for this story so yay
I really like the setup you got going here. I don't like it when people write twilight as oblivious to her own feelings and to her respective ship. Good work, and can't wait for more!
7788595 thanks I agree she needs to learn
D'awww
7789039 yay a daw
7789056 I'm a sucker for TwiJack. Even the smallest smile at each other makes me happy. A full-blown kiss? You, sir or ma'am, have reached the ultra-d'aww territory.
Oh my god, the fluffffffff
7790967 gotta love the fluff
I just have to point out your usage of human terms in this story (AKA hand). You should use "hoof" instead. Other than that and sone other small grammatical errors, this was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
More please!
I agree with Dash32 and Vex Ether. Another great chapter! I can't stop aww'ing; it is almost becoming an issue
Aww...Not again. Please help me
Yet another d'aww. This story keeps breaking my d'aww-o-meter!
Does that mean Pinkie is an Ace? That would be unconventional but I can roll with it and it's a nice bit of character for her. :)
7792330 an ace? Don't get it
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There is more daw to come
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An Ace in this context is someone who is asexual, no real interesting in anyone of any sex.
7792846 oh no that's not it at all don't worry about hint will come soon
7792907 Cool, looking forward to it.
Next two chapters are ready to go. Just waiting for them to get edited
Looking forward for the rest.
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Should be coming soon
Not enough for that tag.
7795600 thanks was kinda worried.
In the comedy version of this chapter:
* AJ becomes violently ill each time Twi teleports with her; but by the end of the evening she's getting used to it, and the vomiting is purely a brief formality.
* The mirror portal works perfectly! But it still turns ponies into humans. Better work on that, Twi!
7797565 ha that would be pretty funny
what the hell is with these ships raridash, Macora, what next lunapie
7800513 close but i already hinted at Pinkie’s twice now
7800590 twas a joke
7804408 oh sorry
and then applejack went nuclear and blew up equestria when she returned from never having used magic before gigity
7804419 sall good
7804428 could you put spoiler on your comment please