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Twilight Sparkle finds a small sapling, the offspring of the tree that had formed her original home in Ponyville.

She plants it, in hopes of eventually seeing it grown to adulthood.

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Comments ( 12 )

Maybe you should've let that idea sit there a little longer. I mean, planting a seed that grew from his old home? Why would Spike want to do that? Especially with the pony he grew up with. What this occasion truly calls for is a bunch of ponies who never even lived there.

Cute~! It was a simple and sweet story, and I just feel a calm vibe from this.

This was... Unexpected...:rainbowderp: I knew that Twi and Spike missed their home, so did I! I went crazy(:pinkiecrazy:) for two weeks in school ever since the season 4 finale. But to think for this to actually happen is pretty cool!:pinkiehappy:

This was very inspiring and beautiful. You seemed to write it just as Twilight would be thinking, which made it very personal and special. Very touching! I look forward to reading more about this tree and Twilight.

You have a very fluid, and rhythmic like prose; I really enjoyed this piece.

:fluttercry: Beautiful. Positively beautiful. :twilightsmile:

7776139 Nice catch on the voice thing! In fact, you might see a change in that next chapter, due to... well, I guess you'll see why. :twilightsmile:

very nice, almost poetic writing here.

7777483 Looking forward to it!:twilightsmile:

Just read the next chapter. I almost cried when I realized all her old friends were gone. I knew it would happen but still...

but to know that time brings new hope, new adventure and new spirit makes that much easier to bear. I admire Twilight and I pity her in a way as well. I just wish for her happiness.

Thank you! This was very well done!

Comment posted by silverspawn deleted Dec 23rd, 2016
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