Twilight Sparkle finds a small sapling, the offspring of the tree that had formed her original home in Ponyville.
She plants it, in hopes of eventually seeing it grown to adulthood.
Twilight Sparkle finds a small sapling, the offspring of the tree that had formed her original home in Ponyville.
She plants it, in hopes of eventually seeing it grown to adulthood.
Maybe you should've let that idea sit there a little longer. I mean, planting a seed that grew from his old home? Why would Spike want to do that? Especially with the pony he grew up with. What this occasion truly calls for is a bunch of ponies who never even lived there.
Cute~! It was a simple and sweet story, and I just feel a calm vibe from this.
This was... Unexpected... I knew that Twi and Spike missed their home, so did I! I went crazy() for two weeks in school ever since the season 4 finale. But to think for this to actually happen is pretty cool!
This was very inspiring and beautiful. You seemed to write it just as Twilight would be thinking, which made it very personal and special. Very touching! I look forward to reading more about this tree and Twilight.
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You have a very fluid, and rhythmic like prose; I really enjoyed this piece.
Beautiful. Positively beautiful.
7776139 Nice catch on the voice thing! In fact, you might see a change in that next chapter, due to... well, I guess you'll see why.
very nice, almost poetic writing here.
7777483 Looking forward to it!
Just read the next chapter. I almost cried when I realized all her old friends were gone. I knew it would happen but still...
but to know that time brings new hope, new adventure and new spirit makes that much easier to bear. I admire Twilight and I pity her in a way as well. I just wish for her happiness.
Thank you! This was very well done!
Did a review of this here!