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Welcome everypony to another commissioned story! This one plans to have many deviations and odd twists, our hero dragged not only to the depths of the ninth-circle, but to the edges of her sanity and oblivion.
good so far, waiting for more!
can't wait to seem more soon.
This promises to be a pretty creepy story. I'm gonna like it.
I like how this looks. I'll bite on another Damaged story.
"Courage, what kinds of enchantments have you placed over your years?"
Woooo! Looks very good!
In fact, it looks exactly like my slice of cake!
A stairway to not the heaven.
Question for Courage: In hindsight,what exactly went wrong with your enchantment on the staff that caused you to be sent to The Pit? Or do you think you were pulled there against your will by your opportunistic "patron."
It's implied that the first lamia to be stabbed died/was completely petrified but it would be better to state it. I was expecting it to attack after the second was vanquished.
P.S. Looking foreword to Courage telling Tirek off to his face that he's a lightweight, amateur pretender for residing in the topmost levels.
Eagerly awaiting an update
Something missing 'tail'?
7783837 Fixed, thanks!
7776018 That's a weird one! It's why I was super frustrated. I've heard of enchantment rich materials, and things that are actually resistant. But this was supposed to be a simple tracking and location enchantment, it was just so the owner could find it among other things. It just didn't want to work!
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Courage would puff out her chest and raise her head. "I have actually cast many enchantments over my years, as well as come up with a number of my own! If anything I love trying to figure out how to make an enchantment work, even if there's no basis. Challenge is fun! But to your original question...
I have cast different kinds of enchantments and imbued spells on many over the years. For example light enchantments, protection from the elements, enchantments to give ponies the eyes of eagles! Strength of the minotaurs! Clarity of the ancients themselves!" She pauses and hmms. "But also some mundane enchantments for the townsponies. Strength enchantments for plows to help out the non-Earth ponies that want to try out farming, oh, and some basic heat enchantments on rocks and stones, for the farms that need to survive a little longer over the winter.
"But my specialty are offensive enchantments!" Pulling out a polearm behind her, she spins it around, circular flames following in her weapon's movements. "Ice, fire, petrification, even a few defensive enchantments. Shields that when struck flash out bright lights and noise! Perfect for the local militia or guard on the pa- wait I'm not trying to sell you anything. ... ... ... wanna buy something?
Well, that was certainly interesting
I'm sorry but I will stop here and now for the only reason that I personally find Futanari disgusting.
(I mean, I've got a boner with the start of this chapter and it instantly died with that part).
It doesn't mean you're bad, it's just me.
Question for mr disembodied voice in Courage's head: "What will you do once you have gifted all your boons?"
7789901 I am sorry to hear that, but I can certainly understand when something is a turn off. Be well.
squirmed
this confuses me?
I was expecting a bad end for the previous chapter? Oh well, does not matter much to me.
7805886 The bad ends happen when she leaves each circle. There will be a bad end next week.
Enjoyable!
Couple of comments and a question.
she saw a strange sight top a ridge to her right.
"on top" or "atop"
that she had to lift and cock her tail,
Is there a different way to phrase this? Confused me because of the double meaning. Had to read it a few times to get it. Recommend "flex" or "bend"
Corignis, assuming this pony makes it all the way back home, do you plan to ever stop by and visit?
7806529 Ah, one of those words used more commonly outside America. Changed it to "flag."
Thanks for the fixes!
This was really hot, and I'd like to ask now-succubus Courage what her favorite part is of being a sex demon?
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Stretching her wings and grinning. "It's beyond compare. It's exhilarating, pleasurable and .... empowering. ... want to find out how much?
7819004 Quite a bit, yes...
Awesome chapter as always, kinda sad we didn't get to see a tentacle bad end though
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Does she still have the double curved horns from previous chapter?
7823037 Bad ends are ENDS, nothing from them carry forward.
7823017 Thanks, fixed :)
Buck you!
We go from this...
to this....
Love the references.
Courage
7856618 Ha, that was the paste-in from previous chapter. Thanks!
Even just the bad ends are magnificent short stories on their own.
Amazing
Ok what kind of demon was that?!?
White
This was an interesting chapter, I am guessing that this circle is sloth seeing that she seem to be content is staying there and forget her mission. I hope you with show and alternate path again that shows what would have happened if Courage had stayed there for the rest of eternity. Also does she still have a dick at the moment?
Always excited to read new chapters of this, loving this story and it's quickly become the one I'm eagerly waiting for each update.
I been wondering what's the name of those circles that courage has to go through to get back home?
7878338 White actually listed the next few. But nopony has said what this Circle is.
7878376 ok and which is name of those circles courage goes through back then and what kinda demon that white is?
7878391 Telling just what White is would give things away a little much. You will have to wait for the next chapter.
7878436 and when will that been out?
7878474 This story is a weekly release.
7878478 ok.
HAHAHAHA!!!
Okay, that was funny!
I love this story
This was a good chapter. Nice work, Damaged.
'Corignis, do you have any new plans now you have a soul?'
SNERK also known as spontaneous combustion in a hayshed fulla damp hay!