I was expecting a bad end for the previous chapter? Oh well, does not matter much to me.

7805886 The bad ends happen when she leaves each circle. There will be a bad end next week.

Enjoyable!

Couple of comments and a question.

she saw a strange sight top a ridge to her right.
"on top" or "atop"

that she had to lift and cock her tail,
Is there a different way to phrase this? Confused me because of the double meaning. Had to read it a few times to get it. Recommend "flex" or "bend"

Corignis, assuming this pony makes it all the way back home, do you plan to ever stop by and visit?

7806529 Ah, one of those words used more commonly outside America. Changed it to "flag."

Thanks for the fixes!

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well, could be also good to have a bad end for the cactus