A human-turned-colt must find his way through his new life as a pony. Feeling like a stranger to the ponies, he must find a way to adjust to living in the land of friendship and what it has to offer. Will it workout with the ponies? Will it be a disaster? Well, there's only one way to find out.
ATTENTION:
This story is going under heavy revisions. I apologize to those who have waited for more chapters, but I will not be continuing this storyline as it is. I have hit a stopping block for a long time now and did not like where this story was heading, so I stopped writing it completely. I want to keep the same idea, but I need to go in a different direction. Thank you for understanding.
-Ghost wolf
Chapters (1)
Yeah, there's a bunch of ways I could go with this story, but I have a plan of where this story is going to go and it will be quite different (hopefully) from any others of its kind. Thanks for the comment:)
Alright, I'm hooked. Always up for a good 'human turns into pony' story. The fact that he's a colt instead is very interesting.
Equestria: Mystery Dungeon? Sounds interesting!
7768625 I'm glad you like it! :)
7768936 ;p
i like it, its not bad. more, maybe?
You have my interest. Let's see where this goes!
Upload whenever. Gives you time to think about what you're writing.
I enjoyed this chapter. Maybe next one he'll do a bit of socializing? I don't know, you're the writer.
So we have our protagonist being an earth pony. I wonder who will take him in, in Ponyville?
7771427 Yeah, I'm not good at deadlines so I think that would be best :)
7771429 ;) I wonder too
Big Mac to the rescue! Hopefully after he gets help out protagonist can get not only his answers but plenty of food.
I like where this is going.
I must ask will Big Mac be a father or brother figure?
8171365 Y'all just hafta wait and see ;)
8171574 I honestly hope it's a father figure
I a man surprised that the nurse didn't acknowledge that Pinkie over did it. Still I think that our protagonist is going to be having a rude awakening when he tries to make his escape and bumps into someone who can easily stop him.
The idiot didn't even think that she could die from overdose, did he?
Well he ran into Big Mac. I wonder how he will explain away his escape attempt and just what is going on?
With how he was acting I am surprised when they found him in the lobby they weren’t thinking that he is in a complete panic. If he couldn’t identify where he is and acting this way he is just blindly lashing out. Keep in mind they can’t see his thought process and they are treating him like he is a normal colt when obviously something is very off about him.
Otherwise good chapter and nice to see Big Mac’s point of view.
9003102
Thank you, glad you like it :)
Really nice! Hope he can evade "capture" for a while !
I love it! When is the next chapter?
9194573
Honestly? I'm not sure. This is kinda my testing story, but I still plan to work on it. I have another story that I need to update as well that I'm working on. I have a lot of stuff going on at work and just in my life in general, so not sure when I'll update this. Maybe soon?
Never noticed this story before, a bit slow on the up dates but it is on a good start, I hope to see more of this again soon.
Pretty standard start, but not a bad one, now that this is out of the way let’s see where you take things.
y’all is for you all, it’s for addressing a group.
Yah would be the better word.
Also Applejack is one word.
Not saying these things to be a jerk just saying.
I like the story so far
"Why do my eyes hurt?"
"You've never used them."
Cease. If his headache cascaded, I doubt he'd be able to think any better.
Fun fact: Unicorn are mentioned in the Bible. It describes them havong two horns.
9941970
Didn't know that, thanks for the fun fact
9942054
Well, as I often tell people, I know a little about a lot.
*cough cough* Best princess *cough*.
In other words, R-U-N.
I really liked this story. Do you plan on updating it?
9941970
Only in some mistranslated versions. The original word referred to wild oxes, if I recall correctly.
I like the story, but I also think you made the main character a bit to dense.
The Monk
Winona let out a bark and immediately ran up to Armor and started licking his muzzle, tail wagging like she was promised cake if she did it enough. -Snakeskin Ducttape
Perfectly understandable.
Shame but understandble.
Hey you do what you want man. I know how it is and I have had to scrap several story's because i didn't like how they ended up. keep up the good work!
The revision is a good idea in my opinion. I've read the story, I generally like it - definitely could use improvement.
Any updates on the revision?
Bruh
oof
So, uhh, it’s been three years, almost four now. Can you put the original chapters back up while you work on ‘revisions’ indefinitely?