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If she's pregnant... wouldn't all the fighting be bad?
Dayum. Wonder what Deus Ex Machina is gonna safe Ryan this time.
Damn....that's how we end the story. Gotta say though...while this chapter was sad in the end, I don't think that it could've ended any other way. Can't wait for more from you.
oh. you really did that.
welp. i hope you'll update this one more time when this gets a sequel/epilogue/whatever.
just so we get the notification.
I want to hate this now. I genuinely do. I am in much too shock for that to happen though. You just broke the expectations of practically everyone who's read this. And while I'm very hesitant to say in a good way, I can't say it was in a bad way. It feels so... incomplete now. But... that raises very many questions. Like: How did Dash know she was pregnant? Why didn't she tell anyone? Where did Ryan's pocket knife come from? I don't remember it ever being mentioned. Why didn't Ryan try and stop Dash when she tried to forcefully take him? Why didn't anyone sit down like the adults they are and think through the entire situation?
I love this story. I do, greatly. As it is now though, I can't say I could recommend it to someone without some sort of sequel being in the works. You've said that there are new beginnings, but aside from Dash's pregnancy, there are simply too many plotholes and tied ends to quantify a sequel, as much as this story needs one.
Fucker!
...The fuck?
I mean, it's one hell of a feint, making us think it was gonna go one way and then going the other, but that's because it's completely unexpected and leaves more questions and issues than it solves.
The what hell is even wrong with Rainbow? The alcoholic psychopath is being infinitely more calm and rational than her (and hormones can only get you so far as an excuse.)
Jesus. You need to add a dark tag after this chapter.
Oh wow! I did not see that coming! Pretty dark in here, Gonna need some flashlights...
Um.....I'm sorry.......WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?! No, seriously, what the ever loving, piss spewing son of fucking cthulu was that?! Look, I get wanting to end your story, but Christ almighty! This is marked as a comedy for Peet's sake! I appreciate the initiative to take a sudden twist with the story, but damn. That whole thing came the fuck out of nowhere.
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I left that one up for assumption. It's pretty obvious how people figure it out.
As mentioned in this very chapter, she was going to tell Ryan when she took him to visit her parents. From that point on, it can be assumed that she would spread the news to everyone else.
Chapter 5: Stop Bugging Me
This was another one that was addressed in the story. He was going to, but Fluttershy beat him to it.
Because Rainbow is almost as stubborn as they come. Imagine how much worse that would get when the hormones kicked in.
If these answered aren't good enough for you, then feel free to tell me to 'Fuck off'. I won't take it personally.
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I want to explain myself, but I can't. It's not that I don't know how. It's just that telling you, or anyone for that mater, would basically screw me over at this particular point in time.