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Agreed.
Great to see another chapter.
Very nice chap bro. Few errors here or there tho. But otherwise nice work bro.
then?
(Another wonderful chapter, Very fun to read. kinda wonder if Luna is gonna karmad for her nightmares she has been giving the human?
Taking bets on how quickly Cady and the human cukkold Shining Armor!
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Nope
One of my favorite chapters in this story.
Yo author,I just wanted to give ya props m8, what with you being your own proof reader and (according to the AN) doing about half the chapters drunk, on top of writing it all, you do a REALLY good job at it all, and I have respect for that, GODSPEED YOU MAGNIFICENT BASTARD
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Much appreciated, buddy!
I'm pretty sure you mean compensation here. There have been quite a number of errors in this story, but this one irked me enough to comment about it. You should probably get someone to go through your story and make edits.
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I have an editor go through the newer chapters. But yeah, sorry. I really need to go through the older ones and fix what I can. I'll see about doing it tonight.
(9/10 I'm drunk while typing these out. I'm honestly amazed they come out even a little readable.)
gonna be honest, I don't want ryan to mellow out or succumb to any "help" that cadance might give. It would be more realistic to show that some people are just assholes due to their worldview, and that sometimes those worldviews are unshakable, paradoxically strengthening in the face of any evidence of them being wrong.
I’m annoyed that I discovered this fic so late, but I’m enjoying it immensely. It’s an interesting take on a hugely oversaturated and creatively exhausted genre.
That being said, Ryan is easily the least likable character in the history of HiE. Not just unlikable but almost impossible personality-wise. Only an actual psychopath could behave in such a manner, and none of the people in his life would keep him around being as poisonous as he is, overly forgiving ponies or not. Did he behave this way before being sent to Equestria? If so, he must have been homeless because you could neither sustain a job or a family acting like he does.
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Considering I based his personality on my own, when I was younger that is, I can honestly say that he had absolutely nothing going for him; he was jobless, homeless and only the worst types of people could actually tolerate his existence.
The idea is for him to be unlikable, which is something that a surprisingly few amount of people have figured out. I didn't want anyone really liking him due to the route I decided to take that would lead to the sequel.
good God what did this man lose in the Human to make him so ....cold