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Okay... This was... painful...
That 4th wall break.
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My pride is getting the better of me now...
Painful how? I'm not sure if you mean emotionally or all together...
Probably all together.
Wait...
Did they just strongly imply that immortality is sexually transmitable?
Immortality is an STI, who'da thunk it.
On the chapter itself, since the only other comments are rather ambiguous: I have no real issues with it or the events as; previous chapters have shown the Sisters feel strongly about Ryan, and recent events give a good reason to escalate their relationship. Nothing cringey or just straight-out awful. The nearest it comes I'd say is the line Ryan says that verges on breaking the fourth wall, but it's a reasonable simile to use in the situation and isn't over-lampshaded or lingered on. If you had done the whole *looks directly at camera* "Says Line" wink wink, nudge nudge thing it would have been to much but you showed restraint.
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*Slow clap* Beautifully worded analysis, my friend. I appreciate your input and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
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The meta...it hurts...it's so cheesy...but damnit im gonna keep reading. Because drunken shenanigans are funny.
A little self insert here author??