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Zyrah

Zyrah #1 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

Huh.

I accept that.

PiMan

PiMan #2 · Nov 18th, 2016 · 3 · ·

More than an implication.

Raibolt

Raibolt #3 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

Would it be possible to get the prequels of pound/pumpkin and carrot/pinkie?

Zyrian

Zyrian #4 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

Tszeb

Tszeb #5 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

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Well, there is incest that is heavily implied beside the actual one... I will give it a pass

Dark Nightshade

Dark Nightshade #6 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

Huh. This is interesting.

Sorren

Sorren #7 · Nov 18th, 2016 · · ·

This was written pretty darn well.

That's pretty much all I have to say about it. I mean, the impression I'm getting from reading it is that carrot cake made an order, then cooked a massive amount of cupcakes wrong on purpose just so he could confront her and fuck her into oblivion. I mean, hey, he probably could have just done that at any other time, but maybe that's his fetish.

argustheseer

argustheseer #8 · Nov 19th, 2016 · · ·

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I probably could have been more explicit... but it was more meant as a training exercise.

Sorren

Sorren #9 · Nov 19th, 2016 · · ·

7732740 Yeah, I could see what you are doing, keeping the stallion purposefully vague and only revealing him through character action and dialogue. I liked it.

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