Princess Luna has returned from a thousand years absence and after a bit of a rocky start she seemed to be coming into her own. However, a series of mishaps to the ponies around have caused ponies to begin to fear her and what the ramblings of one survivor means: "Nightmare Moon..."
It's up to Twilight and the others to discover what is happening and save Princess Luna, even from her own doings.
I conceptualized this story when I first got into MLP at the end of season one. Due to a lot of procrastination and rewriting it has gone unpublished until now. While it may clash with the cannon of today I've chosen to publish it anyway. I hope people may still enjoy it.
Chapters (16)
Either Luna has a dissociative personality or it is Queen Chrysalis.
This story needs an alternate universe tag.
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How so?
It completely in keeping with the cannon of the first seasons.
It was also getting very interesting until the grammar and punctuation errors started filling it up. Get an editor and try again.
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I feel you on that one. However, as I noted at the end of the prologue I did try very valiantly to acquire the aid of an editor, but was unable to find anyone to provide ongoing editorial services.
presence
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:) It's going to take you a long time to edit the story one mistake at time, but I do appreciate you pointing out the error.
Where the hell is clelestia in all this
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Canterlot, they discussed their troubles getting a message to her in chap 3.
I was kind of hoping that Pinkie would have gotten a shot at Dark Star. I think it would be an awesome fight that in universe nobody would expect.
Stick your story in some groups if you want it to get attention.
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I'd love some more attention for the story, how do I go about placing it in groups?
8102935 Just join some groups that would fit your story - like the adventure group or a group for long stories. The search page is very helpful.
Wow, that escalated quickly. Nicely done opening action
Also, I really liked that bit about magical candles!
I hope to get back to the next chapters soon!
Totally confused by that last statement....darkstar just shattered the moon? Why was there a fake moon to begin with? Wouldnt luna be aware that her actual celestial body is no longer there?
Ok....that was heartwarming and i loved it.
That was wonderful. Thank you for writing it. Will we ever see dark star again?