At the end of a grand adventure with her unusual family there comes a problem only Sparkler can see, but she cannot bring herself to say it.
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Are you aware that the title is spelled incorrectly
it should be *Sparkle.
When there is a spelling mistake in the fucking title it does not bode well for the rest of the story. You may want to fix that asap.
This is good
I would have liked it if you had been more clear on the relations of the four (is dinky loomed too? are the doctor and derpy together? If dinky and sparkler are sister and dinky is the doctors daughter why does amethyst call him professor?) But other than that this is brilliant.
I was wondering if the doctor has discovered that equus is actually the earth from the ancient past. does he know that the humans have become extinct and the ponies have evolved to create this new world? or is that just from the HIE genre?