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Um, pardon my french but, what the hell was that exactly?

gauthh #2 · Nov 8th, 2016 · · 7 ·

and this is why rarity is worst pony

A lot of assumptions are made here, assumptions that I don't get.

Spike is a Teenager, that is only a Baby by the standards of the Long Lived Dragons. He is also a full time assistant to a Wizard Princess, not to mention her personal chef. He is immature, and a bit odd, but he is also hard working, innocent, and noble in his own naive way.

So why turn Rarity into your sock-puppet for your opinions, and assumptions on someone that is trying to find their way in the world?

And what in hell makes you think that Spike has freaky fetishes? Or that he even understands what sex is? He may have a crush on Rarity, but I don't think that it's meant to go anywhere. He is going to grow out of it, and probably already has grown out of it.

In the end I think that Spike eventually gets over Rarity and tries his own thing, to try ACTUALLY being a hero. Your little rant here is based on the writers faults in their characterization, and not so much the character.

Just my two cents.

Y tho?

This seems like it could have been a chapter in STS or something, but it is still powerful none the less.

cool man just good writing all around

not really

Meh quality story right here!

7706105 Had a flip of a coin – forced to write story challenge.

Some jackass forced me to write abuse towards Spike from Rarity.

...bastard.

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Is that what that was?

:moustache: troll bait
:duck: right you are my precious scales
:twilightsmile: who else would suffer with bat poop & those other nasty dragons?
:moustache: basket holder?
:raritywink: I just wanted your company
:pinkiehappy: bat poopy

I just have one question, if you please.

Is "You are cringe" really a complete sentence? Do people really say that?

Okay first thoughts of seeing just the title: A
weird pony porno story.

Reading the comments and description: Can't be that bad let's give it a chance.

Reading the first paragraph: Nope nope nope. I am officially done.

Another...well written story. Wow I was not expecting this.

Nice dark fic.

Screw Rarity and the others. Spike go to the Dragon Lands and live with them and when you become strong enough, return and burn their home to the ground. I'm sure Ember wouldn't mind having you there.



You know it makes me wonder how Twilight would react if Spike told her what Rarity said?

7706499 blame Haze

7706095 He's listed as a baby in canon mate.

Everything written in this fic is borderline troll and edgy, and would do best not to take any of it seriously.

Lola.

7706776

It's from a prompt from a discord discussion involving a few edglords I'm looking at you Haze what'd you expect?

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7706495

I am not ashamed of my edge, thank you very much, ya marsupial butt monkeys.:derpytongue2:

Will be finished with that Fluttercord thing General told me to do today. Tomorrow... I have to write a squeal to this. Not enough alcohol in the world to wash away these regrets, and sins.

OWW!! That was painful to read. Poor Spike. Now I prefer Spilight. (Did somebody yelled "Bullsh:yay:t!"??)
Good show mate! Good show!

well felt more like spike should have snap her hooves shoved her face in the dirt and then break her nose drag her upstairs leave her at the door and go to store to buy stuff to cook

Well at least Spike a has memorable personality, unlike you Rarity who's characters is piece of fabric draped over a turd :3 The fabric could be as pretty as it wants but it's thin and will always smells like shit and everyone knows it but that's my personal feelings. :3

7719307 was for jokes. Do not take seriously.

7707801 Rarity the Silk Wrapped Turd? Awesome and true! (LOL)

7838659 i guess. someone was supposed to write a sequel with spike getting high to deal with the trauma. lola

I mean it would have been ok if there was some sot of pay off but,,, I don't know. If he would have gotten angry or violent or if Rarity would have actually dug harder into his psyche....I don't know it had potential and just didn't cross the finish line.

...the fuck did I just read?

The mare smiled, before fully looking back on him. “ Isn ’ t it obvious, dear? Kill yourself. ”

(appear behind her raising my machete) DIE FUCKING BITCH (bring it down to her back and stabbing her all over) heheheheheheheheheHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHABAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

WE'RE LOSING HIM

This really sets the atmosphere wile you read this

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