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Griffons are known for being proud---so when the patriarch of a long griffon line is rendered helpless, he has to break down the walls he's erected between him and his only living relative.

WARNINGS for mentions of severe medical issues.

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I like the kind of moments this story portrayed. They're sudden and make you realize that time is very fickle. Definitely a tragedy Gilda wasn't there for his very last last moments, but at least she connected with her gramps.

Moving, but to me this story isn't tragic. An old man makes peace with his grandfather and escapes all pain.

Nicely done Sue. Again I love your ability with dialogue.

Again I'd like to see where this goes with your head cannon moving forward.

Comment posted by SusieBeeca deleted Dec 5th, 2016

I held off reading this due to he description. It still ended up hitting closer to home than expected. Bleah.

I might argue the very end. It is... not difficult to mistake the dead. You missed the limpness, the actual dead weight.

Take the upvote and go.

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Ah, that's a good point. I've been in rooms with dead bodies but never touched them or seen them close-up. Thanks for the upvote! :twilightsmile:

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