My Name Is Annabelle

This story is a sequel to Three Steps Back

When Granny Smith begins to write a diary, she hopes to chronicle her family's growth. She has no idea what kind of story she's about to tell.

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Solaris Hemera

Solaris Hemera #1 · May 12th, 2016 · · ·

The feels!

I'm sorry about the family members you lost/ are currently losing to Alzheimers. It surely is never easy to let someone go.

Sir Barton

Sir Barton #2 · May 12th, 2016 · · ·

Very nice Sue. Reminds me of the ending of Flowers for Algernon the regression decent. Condolences on your losses, and cherish the memories you have for them.

Miss Sugar-Pink

Miss Sugar-Pink #3 · May 12th, 2016 · · ·

Goodness... I'm sorry you're going through this right now. I know you're strong, though, and you can get through it, no matter what. Just know we'll all be here for you!

punzil504

punzil504 #4 · May 12th, 2016 · · ·

My grandmother used to always say "I'll be (so many years) old next May, if I'm still here." Then one time after she started to forget, she asked my mom how old she was, and she was 92 or 93 by that point. When my mom told her, she exclaimed "Wow, that's old! Are you sure?"

She didn't make it to see her great grandchildren, but she did get to see all of her grandchildren married.

howard035

howard035 #5 · May 14th, 2016 · · ·

I've been through it as well, it's a tough burden to bear.

If it is canon, the details on Hez and the new couples are sweet though.

knetch

knetch #6 · May 15th, 2016 · · ·

it hits a little close to home for me. my grandma also got Alzheimer. and in the last part, the "Wax Apple" was death?

SusieBeeca

SusieBeeca #7 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

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Thank you! Just out of curiosity, what details did you like? I'm cooking up some other fics, so knowing what tickled your fancy might be helpful

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Sorry about your grandmother I wanted the last part to be open to interpretation.

howard035

howard035 #8 · May 27th, 2016 · · ·

7250867 I think Hez calling Big Mac "Unca" was the cutest for the baby, though Lil' Macky was also adorable. I also think you build a really strong Trixie here, with very few details. I could just picture her grinning and shifting her horn ring around so the light hits Applejack right in the eye, then acting smug for about 30 seconds before she suddenly realizes she needs to use the bathroom. Trixie integrating slowly into the Apple Family seems like quite a challenge for everyone involved.

knetch