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Zimprus Nalune
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Zimprus Nalune
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I always like changeling stories. Wait...scratch that...WELL WRITTEN changeling stories.
oooh, going have to read later..... BUT!
from the title/description is this a human turned into a changeling that also died and came back as a zombie with a soul?
That could be very fascinating, even if not still going read later but still...
not bad at all. A few typos, but very interesting either way.
That pony's name sounds slightly familiar.
*cough*
no changelings here
no romance? okay.....
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Description: "Tags and characters will be changed as story progresses." There's some hope for you yet.
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Changelings? I don't know what you're talking about...
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Do tell. I'm certain you've never heard of her...
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Redeem, Revive, Revolt Has the main characture with the same name, And they both kinda look-a-like... Something feels a bit off.
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EDIT: >Finds out, it's your's and lucious' OC
... Son of a Bi-
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Fuck that story, it's horrible! Whoever wrote RRR deserves to be deported!
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Then you'd better get da fuzz outta 'ere.
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Darn, okay.
id be worried that twilight would have a plan to expose me/capture me in the middle of the night.
And then everything exploded...
This fic, I like it.
ANOTHER!!!!
This has... potential. Looking past the OC (I would be a hypocrite if I didn't), the current plotline is decent for what it is as an introduction.
However, before the end I expect a strong rationale for Pyrite continuing to help Revenant... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
Hmm...
I'm not too... sure about this development. If it was me, I'd be more worried about Zecora going about warning everypony I was a Changeling more than being worried about getting that package to Big McIntosh. It's certainly not a pleasant thought, but I'd confront Zecora and make sure she wasn't going to unmask me, whether I had to do it by force or coercion.
So, unless he invents some alibi, this is not going to go well at all...
well, this was good. always nice to have the POV of a schizophrenic changeling beating up on Pyrite.
so, you turned into some sort of bat-fire-alicorn-thing and that few people noticed? you were ON FIRE! that makes for the best disguise.
how did twilight see through that brilliant disguise? i mean, come on, everybody has batwings and flaming hair, not to mention a conspicuous lack of a CM
“It’s jus’ some supplies we need from a zebra named Zecora,” Big Macintosh answered. “She lives in the Everfree in a small hut, ya can’t miss it if ya follow the path.”
"thats not in my job description, so fuck you."
also, honey pony pyrite dont care
powerword: cauldron.
i guess he will have some nightmares tonight after he leeches off of pyrite
Wait, blue coat, blue and white mane, and a wand cutie mark. Was that Trixie?
My, quite a few twists and turns in this chapter. Many a bit too much; could definitely use a little slowing down. Other than that, however, it's fairly good! (Even if I don't care for fight scenes and mostly skipped over those...)
This story has been interesting so far. However I do have one problem with it.
It bothers me that he is so quick to give those ponies up for dead. What's stopping them from taking that pure emotion and returning back to the ponies that it was (I am assuming) stolen from. I mean Common man be a hero.
Well that's my two cents for all it's worth.
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Eeyup, that's why I don't care.
1272708....m...maaaaaaaybeeeeeeee...
1272832 So glad to hear I continue to have your approval. Though I sincerely hope you read the fight scene after Parasite does his teleport-thing. It'll be important later on.
1273066 Pony present>Empty barrel
Pony gone>Full barrel
You do the math. And I thank you for your two cents.
1274749 Oh, you will soon. Promise.
I was wondering when another would be out, Sometime next week?
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Unlikely, school is seriously sapping my creative juices. However, I will try to come out with a quality chapter some time in the near future...
"Some time" is the key phrase there...
1316278 Dont you just hate the unknown? Sometim could mean next week or 2 months.
You nailed Pinkie's character in this chapter. Great job!
I wont say im to happy about Pyrite being a bitch like that but I hope she will try to talk some sence into the others. Would be nice o get more updates, but I can understand if you have work/school/family.
OUch poor revenant.
To be betrayed by somepony he really trusts.
Damn. Great chapter... messed up, but great.
You are a legend best red vs blue song ever
Holy. shit. What a great story, this chapter made it even better, I found myself singing along with Revenant. Fav'd and Up'd, I await more chapters in the future.
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This is all.
Love,
-Cortex Repository
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The rebellious 'v' key hath proven to be mine bane this day...
Fixed. And a salute to my fellow Grammar Nazi.
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Salutations for fixing the bane of existence, serdadu.
And when can I expect another chapter?
Love,
-Cortex Repository
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Eh, current estimates are looking in the vicinity of the next two weeks. School, birthday goodies, and the like will probably have me distracted for a while.
That said, chapter 8 is in the works. So maybe it'll be sooner.
Cheers.
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Good serdadu.
Good indeed...
Or else...
I will find you.
Sweet, new chapter. Disappointed that you're using Trixie, but meh, beggars cannot be choosers. I await the next chapter.
Damn, this dude is sadistic.
1541271 It is Trixie her full name is Trixie Lulamoon.
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I know it is trixie, that is what I was stating: The fact that I dislike that he used trixie.
1552505 My apologizes then I misread your comment. I thought him using was I great idea, knowing Trixie after being ran out of ponyville to think that she would be hanging out in the Everfree Forest also that she usually speaks in third person to be so scared that she talk "normally" just show that who-know-what she has been through. Also I respect your opinion of dislike that he used trixie I'm just curious why?
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Well, apart from me disliking the original characters to start with, I just feel it was too... mediocre and cliche'. It works I guess, but an OC character would have not hurt, could have been better, and would make the writer's job better because he could make up the characters traits as he went.
I can see your point there. My thing is that if he used an OC character it wouldn't given us much to relate to for me all least. Although your right that the author could use the OC as a base and flesh out the details about the OC in future chapters.
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I appreciate the both of you bringing this issue up. I have a few things to say regarding it, but for the purposes of spoilers, I will be vague.
To romaniamiam. I can understand where you do not particularly enjoy that character that is Trixie, and I can also respect the fact that your approval of OC's is selective at best. However, I feel as if I am missing some comprehension here. What about Trixie's appearance is mediocre or cliche? I felt that she was introduced into the story well enough, though I will admit there is room for improvement, as a rule of thumb if not for the situation at hand.
To datpiffx. You really nailed the issue on the head. We (or at least you all) have no idea what Trixie has been through, so I would ask that, for the purposes of the story, you treat her as a completely different character for the time being.
Again, thank you both. I look forward to hearing your responses. This is a topic I think viewers will like to see.
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Well, I dislike the main characters to start, but as for why it is mediocre, simply because it has been used many times before in other stories. I know I should treat each story as a new experience and therefor should never find anything repeating, but I have trouble because of the amount of stories I've read.
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You puzzle me, my friend. I find it odd that you dislike the characters, yet seem to like the story. two different elements, yes, but I find they are intertwined almost irrevocably. Perhaps some more elaboration is in order.
And I would like to say that I completely understand what you mean by repetitive elements. But cliches are cliche for a reason, and that's all I'll say on that.