“That's perfect!” interjected Rainbow Dash, “Fluttershy, we could set up right here in your living room, and surprise Rarity when she comes down!”
The moment I realised this will be good.
With everypony's eyes on her, Rarity wasn't sure she trusted herself to move, but took some reassurance from the knowledge that she wasn't about to be knocked insensible by multiple overpowering orgasms.
Awww... God for her, bad for us.
Finally it seemed, things were starting to look up.
In other words, this is merely the beginning. Right?
7951690 Do you think Rarity wants the princesses to know about this? She'd die of embarrassment (or at least claim so). (Twilight doesn't count, she's Rarity's friend first, a princess second.)
I'm honestly torn between US and UK punctuation at this point, and even considering a deliberate hybrid of the two (not "correct" by any standards, but I'm not even sure it matters). Think I'd rather leave the quotes & punctuation as-is for now.
The moment I realised this will be good.
Awww... God for her, bad for us.
In other words, this is merely the beginning. Right?
Why do I get the feeling Twilight might just bring out her domme side and deliver some 'funishment' to poor Rarity.
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Please write more! I needs to know what happens next!
Yes the plural there was intentional.
... Why doesn't Rarity just write to Luna and/or Celestia?
And this one looks to be both!
period should be inside the quote marks. And repeated a few other times this chapter, too.
Delete the comma. And yes it is, Starlight. Congrats on your first(?) lesson about friendship-with-benefits!
7951690 Do you think Rarity wants the princesses to know about this? She'd die of embarrassment (or at least claim so). (Twilight doesn't count, she's Rarity's friend first, a princess second.)
I'm honestly torn between US and UK punctuation at this point, and even considering a deliberate hybrid of the two (not "correct" by any standards, but I'm not even sure it matters). Think I'd rather leave the quotes & punctuation as-is for now.