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REVIEW TIME!... yea I have no funny joke intro for that one.
So time for Ardent to see the real world, and for us to see a bit of backstory, and beside this chapter being on the shorter side, it feeling more like a single scene in a chapter than a whole one compared to some of the other stories out there, am I quite liking this. Its nice to see that Ardents special ability isn't all powerful, as he himself said, just because he can mimic others does it not mean that he is as strong as them after all, and while his ability seems to work each time are there limitations to it, nicely done!
Seeing as he didn't get any level this time do I wonder why he got one last chapter. I get he got one for killing the giant robot... which still needs an explanation, but he did not really do anything last time, unless the robot gave him so much EXP that finding a new area was what tipped the scales and got him to level up, who knows.
Nitpick:
"Without knowing what to I backed away." Should properly be "what to do"
"Featherweight's Printing Press " Consistency is key, and last chapter did you write the area pop up differently.