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Shining Armor Jr


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On a seemingly normal day in Equestria, an evil warrior from 6 centuries ago returned. his name, Skull Crusher the Dark Wolf, and his plan is to make Equestria end in darkness. Luckily, princess Celestia was preparing for such a situation after hearing the legend about him, from brith 3 foals where selected to become rangers in order to defeat the villan. powerful as fire, shining armor jr was selected to be the red ranger. fast as lightning, blaze was selected to be the yellow ranger, and as pure as water, sera was selected to be the blue ranger. The question is are these three foals enough to defeat a 6000 year old warrior or will they need more power?(loosely based off of mighty morphin power rangers, with some pokemon elements involved)

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Comments ( 14 )

Well... this looks atrocious.

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Seriously though, this was awful. Not only that, but the concept was also terrible. No offence. :twilightsheepish:

By the way, if this is a troll fiction, then nicely done. Until then, go feed your testicles into a saw mill.

Burn this fic. Burn it, and never let it rise from the ashes.

This was shit. Worse than shit. It was a platter of creamy, horrible, shit.

There is no creativity in this, only random shit you threw out of your ass.

What the hell were you thinking when you wrote this?

How to write a fic worse than a troll fic?

I don't even think troll fics get this bad.

I thought it was great tbh. I read it and now I'm pumped the hell up

This is going to sound harsh, but it needs to be said anyway. This fic contains tons of grammar errors, spelling errors, and plot holes not to mention that it lacks any decent character development and also is just hard to read.

*sigh* Now where did I put that ban hammer...

Seriously, this is a peace of crap, and not just regular crap. Like the kind of crap that comes out of the ass of blargian snagglebeast after it ate 120 pounds of raunchy cabbage.

for those of you who posted the mean comments, its my first time writing a story but thank you for the creative critisisum but still, you are jerks :raritycry:

now for those of you who posted the nice comments, thank you for the support :pinkiehappy:

my reacion: betrayal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no but sericly, the story could be alittle better, but im im bein emeasingly honist, i kind of like it, if you fix some stuff in it, you might have good story, here,im at the half way point and its pretty good.

I read up on this guys short bio but from what I can gather its just his bad OC's backstory :facehoof:. Apparently his OC is literally Shining Armor jr. But for whatever reason it knows firebending and looks like a changeling :rainbowhuh:.

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