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Steel Quill
A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
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A Fleur fic? Sure, I'll check it out.
7660439 Let me know what you think
Well, it is 2016. Who says a lady can't come to the rescue? Good on Featherweight to stick to his principles.
HHHHHNNNNGGG.
That is all.
7660445
Absolutely wonderful.
I hope I don't sound narcissistic when I say this but as I read it, I couldn't help but compare it to my own M-rated Fleur fic, mostly looking at character design and execution. Our two versions of Fleur are different in some ways, no better, no worse, just different, but I like yours a lot. I thought of mine simply because they are similar in some respects but yours is a much more down-to-Earth approach and doesn't rely nearly as much on pseudo-sci-fi for the sake of establishing a setting. I loved how you used Featherweight and thought that the situation, though lofty, never really felt terribly unrealistic. He's a lucky bastard but it didn't feel contrived. Fleur, well...she's all kinds of amazing (according to me, anyway), and you definitely portrayed her as such: a kind, down-to-Earth seductress with a heart of platinum. In short, you did a fantastic job with this and I wouldn't be surprised if it became an instant hit.
7660599 That's very kind of you to say! I did glance at your story, and saw it's been rather well-received and liked, judging from the number of comments and likes and all. I'll have to give yours a read sometime when I have the free chance to.
Nothing sort of amazing as usual. Darthsylar12, long time reader, first time commenter. That was great. Emotional and Sexually stimulating throughout and all in all satisfying on both ends. I like the idea of Featherweight and his photography talent but never have I seen it used so well both romantically and erotic. I've thinking of dabbling in this type of writing and the one that inspires me most is your works that manage to accomplish both rewarding reads with intimate content. From someone looking to try his hand at this, do you have any advise? Other than that I loved it and look forward to your next works.
7660689 Thank you very much for the kind words, and for being a long-time reader. It makes me happy when I hear people enjoy my stories.
Concerning advice, I feel it'd be better if I pm-ed that to you than to post it all here. But I will absolutely encourage you pursuing your own ideas and writing them out. The old remark of "all ideas have been done" is a fallacy, because in reality, all ideas have been done in one singular way. The challenge is presenting your idea in your own unique way, a way that suits you.
With a name like Flare Shot, it more sounds like he should be working with pyrotechnics.
7660966 It was a little difficult to come up with his name, but I ran with the idea about "lens flare" involving cameras. It seemed to work the best for his character.
Knocked this one out of the park! I've been reading and following you for a while and I do belive you made this one of my favorites on the site.
Ah Fleur, such a wonderful mare.
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7661600 Thank you very much! Did anything in particular stand out that you liked? This one was different for me to do, so I'd like to know what worked well or stood out the most.
>>Steel Quill Firstly I'm a sucker for Fleur and the way you wrote her character was phenomenal. Big part for me was the dialog for me it's hard to write with an accent but you managed to capture not only Fleur's but Photo's accents without over exaggerating them.
7662487 The dialogue for her and Photo Finish was a little tricky. Fleur's accent, to me, comes out most when she is emotional or passionate. For Photo Finish, I actually channeled some J. Jonah Jameson for her behavior, and as for her accent, that's entirely natural for her.
7662602 My first thought when Featherweight was in Photo's office and Flare burst in was Peter Parker and Eddie Brock so I totally can see the J. Jonah Jameson in her. Back to the accents even when you didn't write it in it was easy to keep it going in my mind as I read. Definitely something I'm taking away from this story to make my own writing sound so forced.
7661913 Everything that I read in the story was able to keep me from cringing too much, while the drama was more than enough to keep me at the back of my seat. And... well I did get a bit aroused at the final chapter. Just like in your story w/ Fluttershy in it. I wonder if you'll do the rest of the Mane 6 though. I look forward to your future AU stories with them.
7662754 I have put some thought to a Rarity story in the future, but thats still in the R&D department of my brain. So we'll just have to wait and see
7660503 It's mighty fancy catching you here
7660966 More like he should be working with incendiary rounds...as a target....asshole
7662907
Please excuse my blistering ignorance but...have we met?
Also, apparently, someone disagrees that a woman is perfectly capable of coming to a man's rescue every so often. Oh noes!
7660503 there's always that one who wants women to be cooks and baby-factories, what the hell whoever down voted this?
7662771 I would like to see this continued, maybe not as Clio if you don't want, but the way you set this up was masterful! I want to see more of these two in a slice of life kind of deal
7663169 I do not know if I would have success in writing a sequel, as this one was quite an endeavor for me. I'm delighted so many people are liking it. Perhaps in the future, if inspiration strikes?
7663194 glad to hear it!
Yay!!! NewSteel Quill story!!!
Can you make a bonus?
7665155 A bonus chapter? Or how do you mean?
7665162 An aftermath leading up to even more sex for those two.
7665168 Well, I do like this pairing. Even with how difficult it was to make the whole story work, the end result is nice, in my eyes. As for a bonus piece with them getting down and dirty again, maybe one day? I mean, there's plenty of opportunity for them both. I just have to figure out what that'd precisely be
Hm... This looks interesting.
7665333 Feel free to let me know what you think! Positive remarks, constructive criticism, so on.
7663064 That is a good question. I did nothing.
I like this version of Photo Finish. Most people write her as somewhat invasive, so it's nice to see a version of her that's just passionate while still being a good person.
Oh, and you are amazing for writing a story using nothing but side characters like this.
This is unlike most clopfics. It's interesting not just erotic. The story really pulls you in unlike other fics where you just want to see the clop. This story is by far, C'est Magnifique!
7669488 Thank you very much, that's very kind of you!
I've always just had a thing to give the side/background characters their own fair chance for a spotlight. Plus, its fun getting to shape them and give them depth that we don't see in the show. A lot of Photo Finish's character actually came from channeling J. Jonah Jameson into her.
7669909 Thank you! I like making my stories have some purpose and thought behind them, and not just go straight for the nitty-gritty.
7670004 I like to my work to follow the exact same theme as well, building the relationship between the couple and developing the character past what is expected of them.
Can you make an epilogue chapter where Feather makes it big as a photographer?
7670604 I wanted to make that be an ending chapter, but I had trouble writing it out. Endings are hard to get down right.
7670622 ah well the story is good as is but it leaves the question of whether or not Feather was successful as a photographer
7670631
well he definitely succeeded somewhere
Very good
Wow... that was actually really good. Like... EXTREMELY good! You got ME falling in love with Fleur, and I could see everything so vividly.
Your story definitely too me THERE.
7692130 Thank you! That explains the extra section you added it to also, huh?
But I am glad you enjoyed it 
Okay. Let's see if what Flare said make Featherweight change his approach in any way. If so, will it be a good way?
ME WANT MORE!!!!!!! I really like this one. Please continue this
7669411 maybe it was trump he is a known sexist
Meant as a joke pls don't take seriously I just go by rumors I don't know if he is or not a sexist. But I do THINK he is.