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Oldtakufanboy


Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

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First of all: Good story! Was very nice to read! :pinkiesmile:

Second: If you want to write a sequel about this, I would be more than happy.

Third: Damn, is this guy lucky. I guess any other girl would have reacted like this: "What?! You don't remember me and last night? :O How dare you?!" *Smack across the guys face* And she's off to be never seen again.

Cheers!
\m/

That was just peachy for a story about ms. Cherry :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Llyander deleted Jan 9th, 2017
Comment posted by Oldtakufanboy deleted Jan 9th, 2017

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Dude don't worry about the bad things that other people say. I think it was a awasome story and I'm not even really a big fan cherry but this was really good I love your story's.:pinkiesmile::yay:

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Thank you so much. I can care less about the negative things people say of my works.

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That's a rather bad attitude to have, dude - and I'm not trying to be mean here.
You gotta take the good with the bad. Without people pointing out the negatives in your work, I promise you that you will not improve as a writer. Criticism is such an important tool in any form of art, be it literature or otherwise. It'll be presented harshly, even rudely at times, but in the long run it will almost certainly help you grow as a writer.

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Okay. Sorry about that. I apologize

I'm just here to complain about him saying "holy shiza" 'cause that's not at all how the word is spelled. It's "Scheiße" or "Scheisse", German for shit/fuck. Moreso the former than the latter.

7512622

Ohhhh, so that's how it's spelled. Thank you

Here's your 50th like from me! Oh! And a fave, too.

7512622 Hell, I use shiza( Shy-zah) in the same way that I use fuzznuggets. Alternative swearing!

7512905 I understand that's the point of it, but nobody is gonna hear that word and think "oh, he's spelling it shiza in his head." If they know what it's supposed to be, they're still gonna hear you swear.

It does need some work, but it's good. Just need some more descriptive details added like I did with my new one-shot. :twilightsmile:

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I'm still working on being descriptive

7568112

You'll get there soon. :twilightsmile:

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At the risk of being a jerk, look at some of my more recent clopfics. I put tons of emphasis on fine details.

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