i live to serve the princess of the night, aka the goddess of the moon aka princess luna...^^
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This is my first Jubilee clopfic and you nailed it
7500965 my first writing one too
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You need an editor to fix a lot of these misspellings and grammar errors. Besides that, the pacing in the clop section was well done. You get a like.
One thing I noticed was that there was no mention of a "Human" tag, yet in the first paragraphs I already find you mentioning that the main character is a human.
I'd fix it ASAP
7502123 thanx it's fixed up.
This was good great t see cherry gets some love
Tis a glorious addition to thine repituar of stories!