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I love this story!
A wonderful story that is in it self well told and very well written I am left wanting to see a sequel to this.
Not bad, not bad at all. I quite literally felt the emotions of the story
I don't normally read too many AppleShy fics, but this was well done. The romance felt organic and I suppose the word I'm looking for is Adorasexy? Yeah, I'll go with that. I also enjoyed how earnest they both were about experiencing nature as, well... nature intended. If I may ask, what inspired you to make them have their little nude adventure?
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the read!
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Adorasexy. I like this word.
The idea sort of came to me on a lark I guess, but I have a bad habit for that - getting ideas at inopportune moments. I threw this together over two lattes at Starbucks. I've been enjoying writing about Fluttershy lately - I didn't used to be very into her, but write a few stories about a character and i guess they grow on you. Applejack seemed like an appropriate partner for this sort of activity. I just had something...soft and sweet in mind, with a gentle sensuality and some naturist freedom in it. Appeals to me I suppose, and watching Legend of Everfree provided the perfect setting for it. I think there's more to tell here too, if folks are interested in reading it!
I just learned something new, thanks to you. I've never heard of the Persian flaw before, but I love the idea.
Yay, traditional schooling...woo...
Applejack's dialog is certainly on point!
Fluttershy, bat whisperer. *quiet skrees*
Just try and stop her. Thunderkindness are GO!
Sometimes I wonder if the world's so small
That we can never get away from the sprawl
Can I just say how lovely that comparison is. I just...hnnnngh!
more hnnnghhhing
"I feel pretty, Oh, so pretty, I feel pretty and witty and gay!"
I bet the farmboys wouldn't mind seeing those ripe apples.
Boy, this really hits home for me. It's only been a few years, but...all my old friends, we've definitely drifted apart. I think of them with fondness but also with an ache in my chest, as if there were some heavy stone lodged deep inside me. The transition to adulthood is...not really all that fun.
Even her intimates are cute. Darn it, Fluttershy, stop it...I can only take so much of your cuteness!
Time was when I felt the same way. It definitely takes some curiosity and openness to get past the mental barrier to overcome the fabric barrier. x.x
I've been waiting so long
To be where I'm going
In the sunshine of your love
Applejack totally eats up the 'frou-frou' stuff
"Shampoo and nothin' else! What use do Ah have for that conditioner stuff? Ah'm a farmer, not a beauty queen!"
D'awwwwwwwwww!
And how!
Fluttershy certainly isn't pulling any punches.
"They're real...and they're spectacular."
Nudgenudgewinkwinksaynomore~
I guess that's one major to cross off the list?
Orrrrr add it right back to the list!
She blinded me with breasts!
Mwahahaha, how convenient~
Maybe they do have it easy...but that doesn't stop me from wanting a pair of my own <_<
Down...down! Go down, damn you! Why here, why nowwwww?
My introduction to the term 'haberdashery' was the BBC comedy Are You Being Served? "Mr. Humphries, are you free?" "I'm free!"
I think AJ's onto something...
Zero to kiss in an eternal second! TOOT TOOT, THE SHIP IS ON ITS WAY!
Y'all are totally twitterpated.
To friendship, and beyoooond!
Sometimes you just want to kiss your friends. Sometimes they want that too.
Bootyful.
Yesssss, pet names between the two friends turned fresh lovers!
*eyebrow waggling intensifies*
I need to use this line sometime (even though pennies are no longer a thing here in Canada!)
Nature always wins. Always.
Another d'awwwww moment.
This totally /begs/ for a sequel. Pretty much everything you write does, heh. Never stop being amazing.
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Twitterpated is a word I have not heard in an Applejack coon's age. And why is it nobody knows about the Persian flaw!?
Yeah, that part? The elder brother of a friend of mine in high school basically told us the exact same thing before we all graduated. We didn't believe him then. We do now. That's where the bit between AJ and Mac comes from in this story.
I really want to sequel this. And I want Fluttershy to ride that scooter more. The problem is there are like three other stories I also wanna sequel! Decisions!
Anyway, thanks for taking a look
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One doesn't really truly believe it until it happens to them. I wouldn't say I didn't believe it, but I just put it completely out of my mind until it happened, and then that sage warning came rushing back.
So...many...stories...
I know the feel. My main stories are kinda getting ignored at the moment because I've thrown some words into a few others. The writing never stops, it only just flows here and there like a zigzagging river.
Anytime, Wish.
The emotion really hits you if you're a college student who moved away. Very touching. I thank you.
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I'm glad the story was able to provoke a meaningful response. Thank you for reading it!
An Apple Shy flick, alright I'll give it a read.
*four hours later*
.... you know what I am right now I am absolutely floored. One of the hardest things for writers to ever achieve is to achieve emotion not only within their characters but with their environment and with their readers. Do I think you pulled it off? Yes. This was an absolutely adorable story from start to finish, especially since it comes off a good EQG movie (Though anything after Friendship Games would classify as amazing.) And I do have to agree that this is adorasexy in every way, I am proud to put this thing in my favorites and my library. 9/10
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Go onto derpibooru.org and tap that into the search bar. Then enjoy.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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So it is! And ironically the first thing I saw was...Camp Everfree Fluttershy. It's a sign!
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I hope it was four hours well spent!
7690515 If you classify sitting back in a chair absolutely stunned as well spent then yes it was
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You flatter me sir, but I'm really glad you liked it
7690844 flattery was not my intent but if it did I am very happy. Good writers must always be praised.
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I'm just pleased when anybody both favors my work with their time, and takes away some enjoyment of it with them
7690889 now that is pleasurable to everybody. Hard work and a strong dedication always work out in the end
NOTE- Since Fimfiction now has specific entries for the EqG versions of various ponies, the characters listed for this story have been altered from 'Applejack' and 'Fluttershy' to 'Applejack (EqG)', and 'Fluttershy (EqG)'.
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I realize you reviewed this story three years ago and I apologize for my negligence, but I wanted to say thank you for your interest--I linked your review in the story description. What you mentioned was more or less what I was going for here--I'm glad it came through!