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Purveyor of substandard horse-words since 2012. [they/them]

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That is messed up....
Poor Rarity :raritycry:

:derpyderp2: Ladies use pills, Gents use messier means :coolphoto: Vanity plays a roll in ones end.

:fluttercry:
:twilightoops: Spike didn't take it too well
:pinkiegasp: Equestria burned as Rarity dribbled
:trollestia:

This story is definitely good, yet that last part feels kind of odd.

Like, who writes a suicide letter while committing suicide? And then describes how same suicide feels?

It's just kind of awkward.

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You will find the Holy Grail in the Castle of Aaauuuggghhh.

I like this for the sole reason that it is unique. Usually when people write or draw fanart or whatever about one of the main characters committing suicide, it's Fluttershy. Fluttershy is too often perceived as the most likely to kill herself for a variety of reasons. While I can't dispute this particular story being kind of messed up, I don't dislike it. It was interesting, well thought-out, and unique. Not to mention extremely heart-wrenching. Granted, the ending kind of threw off the whole tone of it and seems very out-of-character. Earlier in the story, Rarity was trying to make sure her friends weren't too messed up by her death. Yet at the end of the letter, she sees it fit to actually describe how she is killing herself. Seems kind of counter-intuitive to Rarity's intentions.

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