I am a good ideaperson but not yeat the best story writher and i am from Sweden so i don't know the best English but i do my best.
One day for a special pony hears a scream that gives his life a new turn but later on he finds that his biggest secreat is reavealed and he has now few ways to go.
Wil he save somepony or will he die or will he take control well let's find out.
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This is a nice idea but...Dude!... A editor, get one!
I've no choice but to leave a down-vote. The plot was bland, the grammar was really bad, the OC was unlikable, and I was VERY aware this is amateur writing while I was reading.
its crap its all over the pales fix the spaling and grammar fix the plot and over all of the story. its macking fluttersh cry
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I agree it is bad and I might never go back to this.