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MrNumbers

Joined January 2012
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An Australian Amateur Author, Alliteration Enthusiast

Stories (10)

  • Late Fees
    Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Equestria, is still, above all else, a dedicated librarian and bibliophile. Books must be cared for. Books must be returned on time. Books must be respected.

    1,854 words · 4,132 views · 710 likes · 6 dislikes
  • The Demesne of the Reluctant Twilight Sparkle
    When Luna gifts Twilight the town of Ponyville and its surrounding countryside as her demesne she's initially confused. Then, after double checking her dictionary, more than a little concerned.
    26,720 words · 6,764 views · 1,265 likes · 16 dislikes
  • Cupcakes, Chaos and Crushes
    A short story about Twilight Sparkle trying to write something very important. Alone. Quietly. Pinkie decides that's boring and wants to help. Hilarity and awkward misunderstandings ensue as an unstoppable force meets an immovable object.
    6,797 words · 3,492 views · 435 likes · 9 dislikes
  • Sonnets by Twilight
    Twilight has made friends since arriving in Ponyville, but still feels somewhat... lonely. Octavia finds herself isolated in high society, and her passion has left her, leaving her... empty. Can these two find what they need in each other?
    50,398 words · 4,450 views · 577 likes · 19 dislikes
  • Twilight's Movie Night
    21,704 words · 9,994 views · 960 likes · 45 dislikes
  • The Sweet Meet and Greet
    12,233 words · 1,321 views · 158 likes · 5 dislikes
  • The (un)Life and Times Of Specter Shift
    26,273 words · 1,396 views · 164 likes · 10 dislikes
  • The Closet of Unrequited Love (Extended)
    2,543 words · 2,637 views · 174 likes · 12 dislikes
  • The Maretrix
    16,875 words · 1,170 views · 50 likes · 3 dislikes
  • I Am The One Who Trots
    2,851 words · 120 views · 8 likes · 0 dislikes

Blog Posts (44)


Twilight and Dash, upon discovering that the long awaited "Daring Doo 4" movie contains, eugh, Humans, decide to rent out A Nightmare Moon on Elm Street.

Of course all their friends are invited. There is absolutely no way any shenanigans could possibly ensue.

None.

First Published
26th Jun 2012
Last Modified
18th Sep 2012

Comments ( 625 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

Somehow I get the feeling there won't be very much movie-watching in this fic.

There were some GREAT lines in this, such as: "I’ll show you and Pinkie and Applejack and Fluttershy and even Rarity and Rainbow Dash! Especially Rainbow Dash! Which is me, because I’m just that awesome!" :rainbowlaugh:

#2 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

This is going to be good!  :twilightsmile:

#3 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

My shenanigan radar is coming up blank. No shenanigans here, not for at least 3 miles, nosiree-

Wait, the batteries are dead. Lemme review while I find some more...

It's well-written, and I spotted no mistakes (though, I did sort of skim it gathering the important points rather than fully scrutinise). I can sense nothing is really going to happen, but that's what makes the story good: Rainbow Dash finds out what horror movies are like, and the rest find out how accustomed she is to them. The interesting part is the fact that you could take it in any direction - there's a lot of potential for anything to happen...or, indeed, nothing at all.

Keeping an eye on this.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

I hate HiE movies, they're such a cheap gimmick, unless they are written well, like Through the Eyes of Another Pony, or THe Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog. George Lucolt really hit a new low.

#6 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

Cute little story so far. Looking forward to the next update and more non-shenanigans. Nonanigans? Something like that.

#7 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

>>815641 Ooo! How about, "“You finish that word, punk, and I will style your hair. I mean it. I will make you beautiful! There will be curling irons involved. When I am done, I am going to wash that mane of yours, and condition it. It will be silky-soft for weeks. Do I make myself clear?”

#8 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

Why not call it a ChimiCherryChanga? :pinkiehappy:

#9 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·
#10 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

>>815831 That line was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

On a different topic, they totally ruined Daring Do with that fourth movie.

#11 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

Can't wait for the movie to start! I really want to see Fluttershy's reaction to all this horror movie thing! :rainbowlaugh:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

This WILL be featured, I guarentee.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

Hmm, a description from the frontpage that actually makes me want to read a fic? Hell hath surely frozen over. Will update with opinions.

Because your a pegasus.

Your should be you're.

“Well, I was sort of trying to figure out sextant stuff, well, that’s what Twilight told me it is”

Missing punctuation at the end.

As for story comments the story was great and the jokes were hilarious. The characterizations, while a tittle exaggerated was not beyond reasonable and appropriate for a comedy fic.

I only have 2 comments/questions:

1: Rainbow was Twi's "ride" home from Canterlot? What, was she just going to carry her or did she have a small chariot or wagon?

2: I do not understand why Applejack had "a little gold telescope in her mouth". Can you explain the joke? Because I obviously don't get it.

Also I look forward to more. One of my favorite older comedy fics has them going to a horror movie.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

So far I like it tho it was kind of hard for me to know who was talking, but over all, I think it's a pretty good story.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 1d ago · · ·

I thought that this was really funny. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

#17 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

Pinkie should really stop looking for stuff underneath Twilight's bed.

#18 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

I love this man. It's a great laugh, the Rocky Horror Picture show was a very nice little touch. Now I'm wondering if there is a MLP Rocky Horror Picture show...Hmm. Anyway. Very well done plot wise and I can't wait to read more. :pinkiesmile:

#19 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

Is an interesting concept.  Show us more.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

Sorry...I was laughing so hard I forgot what I was reviewing.....hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....ahhh.....this is funny as buck, I LOVE this story, I'll leave a more length review later on, I'll be tracking this.

#22 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

>>815966

The little gold telescope is the sextant Pinkie was going on about.  Or at least a part of it.  Not sure why it ended up in AJ's mouth though... :applejackunsure:  Maybe Pinkie was a bit too enthusiastic in pulling it out or something...

#23 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

Somewhere close by, if you listened carefully enough, mournful honking could be heard from somewhere in the general direction of Fluttershy’s cottage.

Fluttershy committed animal cruelty!!

#24 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 23h ago · · ·

>>816398

Oh, OK. Sextants are more than just the telescope part though...

Wait a minute...

She turned around to see Pinkie Pie standing over Applejack, who was hyperventilating on the floor, with a little gold telescope in her mouth.

OOOOOHHHHHHH!!!.... I see. It was the sentence structure that was confusing me. The reason it was described as "a little gold telescope" was because the perspective had switched to Rainbow Dash. And it's entirely possible from the wording that the sextant is not in AJ's mouth, but in Pinkie's.

Hey, author. Might want to not make that sentence a separate paragraph so it's better illustrated as RD's perspective, you may also want to change the wording to make it clearer.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>816458

:rainbowderp: Huh.  Yeah, that is a confusing sentence.  Author, you might wanna straighten that up.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Will you people please stop making Kingdom of the Crystal Skull jokes?! Some of us actually like that movie.

#28 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

This chapter is delectable!

ANOTHER! :flutterrage: *smashes cup on the floor*

#29 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

HOLY SHIT LUNAS IN A SNUGGIE I'M IN

#30 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>815750

He re-released another film, didn't he? Ugh...

#31 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

yes i was in b4 featured ha ha

#32 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Yeah... I can't picture them correctly for this fic. I imagine them looking like their HotDiggetyDemon portrayals, and the stuff going on certainly helps. On the other hand, they still have their regular voices.

#33 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

:yay: I'm LIKING this idea~!

NOW MOAR!!! :flutterrage:

please? :fluttershysad:

#34 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

“CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS, CRUSADERS!”

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

sextant+books under bead+ Pinkie= some that is without a doubt scary, but fun. if ya catch my drift.

#36 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

I'm commenting before I read this because I read the description. I found it highly ironic since I am currently in the middle of an, "A Nightmare on Elm Street" marathon.

Now to read.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Well, that name in the description alone is giving me the thought that Nightmare Moon is next Freddy Krueger, so...you know the drill:

#38 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

I have now read this chapter and am currently impatiently waiting for the next.

Also, Changas as is spelt with an a, not an o.

#39 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

cute, i am keeping an eye on this.

#40 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

>>815857

:duck: That's it! Makeover time!

Great story, i'm going to be watching this.

#41 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

So wait . . . is the fourth Daring-Do movie actually just Whip and Wing?

#42 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Oh yes.  Take my ticket, I am on this ride.  :pinkiehappy:

#43 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

“You finish that word, punk, and I will style your hair. I mean it. I will make you beautiful! There will be curling irons involved. When I am done, I am going to wash that mane of yours, and condition it. It will be silky-soft for weeks. Do I make myself clear?”:raritystarry:

That line sealed the deal for me.

Favetracking like a BAWSS.:pinkiegasp:

#44 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

I have an amazing imagination....which means I spent the past five minutes laughing my flank off at how hilariously awesome this story could get!

#45 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

>>816888 No, that turned out to be a Lyra/Rainbow Dash fanfic.:pinkiehappy:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

okay. this looks good. tracking.:yay::ajsmug:

#47 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

A good enough story, with an excellent main idea and some good humour, but it's just not gripping me. It seems to be moving at quite a fair lick, a bit too fast to really focus on it. Slow down, describe more, and write a bit longer and you'll have that featured box for weeks. I'll fave this to see how you develop, and like it because, well, I like it! :twilightsmile:

#48 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

LOL @ the picture "Headless in da hood" :rainbowlaugh:

#49 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

Shenanigan levels increasing rapidly. Gentlemen, I am afraid we are about to cross the event horizon into *removes glasses*...hijinks.

#50 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

>>816865

YOU'LL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>816680

I was too! Lol!

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