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Harmony Split
Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving
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I enjoyed editing this.
I refuse to comment on the grounds that it may incriminate me. :P
Pretty sure I incriminated myself a long time ago. Guilty as charged, I throw myself on the mercy of the (lunar) court.
Loved this story. My only complaint would be that your version of the bat ponies honestly seems a bit OP to me. I mean, they shouldn't just be superior to the pegasi in every single aspect. How about them having bad eyesight during the day or something like that, just to distinguish them a little bit better from the other pony races? Otherwise it's just bat ponies > pegasi. But nonetheless, great story. I really love these two characters
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They are ancestors to Luna
Of course they are OP
Everypony can write or imagine them like they want, this is my view
7624882 Of course everyone can write them as they please; it's just that the whole fight scene with a friggin former Shadowbolt
not standing a chance against a bat pony recruit that just recently joined the guard seemed a bit unrealistic to me. 
But with them carrying Luna's DNA it kinda makes sense, I guess.
I just feel that they are less interesting and dynamic as characters like this.
But anyway, keep up the great work and write whatever you feel works best
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Midnight Flow isn't a new recruit anymore.
I think you missed quite a few chapters of my LT stories
7624959 You kinda missed my point. I don't know what the trope is called but here is an example
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I saw your point and it was noted.
However, they are and stay Luna's ancestors.
Of course they are powerful, I set them as Equestria's only defenders in my Lunar Tales.