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Unless you are changing or using some alternate head-canon for Reptile's species you've dun goofed. :ajbemused:

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Not really to anyone who even remotely knows about Reptile and considering the story has been tagged as Human and put in the HiE group it's worth pointing out.

No I mean reptile is not a important character in Mortal kombat seris

What does he do that is so important? Besides his in mkx storyline...

Whats the term for the character you're best at in MK? I know in SMB it's your main, so would this be the same? If so I main Johnny Cage in all Mortal Kombat games, and Jason Voorhees in MKX

Five years have passed, I had turned twenty three and the civil war was still going on, Kotal had made a peace treaty with Earthrealm. Mileena who still leading her rebel army now had a powerful amulet at her disposal,but not just any amulet, it was the fallen elder god Shinnok's and thanks to that Mileena wiped out half our forces with it.

With a wave of my finger and a flick of my dick one zap from me will kill you quick so get on your knees to suck and blow but not right now Ive got to go

I love this story so far! Hope to see more!

Just Rainbow Dash will be enough to ruin the first impression

Ooooo. I can't wait for more.

Will razor see his father again or will he see someone else from earth?

Make more, this is really good. :pinkiehappy:

when will Spike become his disciple?

Will this continue?
Its really cool

Really want to see what is planned for Spike too

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Oh don’t worry it will I’ve just been on a really long hiatus sorry about that

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Ok
Looking forward to it


What will happen with Spike?

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Don’t worry it I will get back to writing again, it’s just I was going through some personal issues for a while

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Well, Razar deserves better.

From the Mane Six. And hopefully, and eventually from the Kombat Kids too. And should owe Razar a bunch of big apologizes.

Meanwhile, Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders exchanged nervous glances, knowing that they had more troubling news to deliver. Sweetie Belle hesitantly spoke up, “Fluttershy, there's something else we need to tell you. We saw a terrifying fight in the forest – a ninja in green and black clothing, The ninja, he... he killed the ghoul with his bare hands.”

Fluttershy’s eyes widened in shock, her peaceful demeanor momentarily shattered by the revelation. “Oh my goodness, that sounds so dangerous. We must inform the others,” she said, her voice filled with concern for the safety of her friends and the forest.

Spike looked around at his friends before asking, “Fluttershy, do you have any idea who this ninja might be? Fluttershy gently patted Winona, lost in thought before replying, “I’m not sure, Spike. It’s all quite concerning. We must warn the others so they can be prepared.” Fluttershy’s voice held a tone of determination, showing her resolve to protect the forest and its inhabitants.

Seriously author? You just let them casually ignore that this Ninja basically save them from the clearly hostile Ghoul? :facehoof:

Does it really matter if he's dangerous? He's only a danger if you STUPIDLY made him an enemy to ya!

It's better to be his friend and a powerful ally.

Unbeknownst to him, Zecora, a wise and observant resident of the realm, had been watching from between the trees. She could see the look of a broken soul in Razar's eyes, the pain and turmoil evident in his every movement. Approaching him with a gentle but determined stride, she could sense the lingering shadows of his past weighing him down.

"Brave warrior, I see the burden you carry," Zecora spoke softly, her voice filled with empathy and understanding. "But know this - even the strongest soldiers can be broken by the trials of war. You are not alone in your struggles, and there is always hope for healing and redemption."

Razar looked at Zecora, her words resonating deep within his troubled heart. In her presence, he felt a very small flicker of hope, a twinkle of light breaking through the darkness that had consumed him for so long. As he took a moment to breathe in the wisdom of her words, Razar wanted to believe the Zebra's words, but horrors he faced in Outworld were to great he wonders if there really is any hope for him.

At least Zecora is very wise, and is at least a friend to our protagonist.

I just really hope the Mane Six don't make another over cliche of falsely attacking him, especially you Rainbow Dash!

🙄 😒

I'm open to listen to suggestions, and also let me know which Mortal *Kombat* *character* you guys would love to see in the story, even if there dead cause come on no one every truly stays dead in Mortal Kombat anyway check out my other stories let me know what you think of those I am officially back.

If it's any Mortal Kombat Characters?

At least be either the Kombat Kids or Johnny Cage and Sonya Blade.

I just want this stupid and slightly racist/xenophobic animosity finally be repaired between Razor and these characters.

However, just as he was about to deliver the fatal blow, Razar heard the unmistakable sounds of the Tarkatan horde drawing near. Realization dawned on him - he would not be able to defeat an entire horde on his own. Reluctantly, he knew he had no choice but to retreat, his mission incomplete.

Before he turned to leave, Razar leaned in close to Mileena, his voice low and menacing. "You may have escaped death today, but remember this - you won't be so fortunate next time we meet. Your reign of tyranny ends now, but your punishment is far from over."

Why doesn't he just give her a quick death by either chopping her head off or rip out her heart out, instead of wasting his time making a empty death threat monologue?

Cuz he AIN'T the one that did her in.

This is probably a excuse for Mileena to brutally die by that fan-hated of D'Vorah.

I am really surprised this got a new chapter.
Awesome

Can't wait to see how much powerful and badass Spike would be once he ends up being trained by Razor maybe.

Wonder what other MLP characters would show up too?

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