Hey.

Good job. I can;t wait for them to realise the stone coffin has someone still alive in it. Someone who's famous for three words....RIP AND TEAR

Fucking great chapter. Loving the story

holy heck this seems just from the start like a idea i had for a story

when are you going to continue the story? this is very good.

7682654 I've been distracted with work the last few weeks and writing on my phone is hard when your trying to edit. the story is still on no worries there

Now THIS is an interesting doom story. I really like how you incorporated the new Doom game's lore within your story. Hopefully Twilight and the gang do not summon any demons cause that would be the last thing they would ever need.

Ouch. Though it sounds interesting... to have misspells in the very summary of it is not a good sign. Using 'board' where you mean 'bored'.:\

RIP AND TEAR!

7976267 Yes. + Starlight and Spike

Boredom, not board'em. I could understand boardem, but why is there an apostrophe in there? You really need to go over your spelling and grammar. Having a mistake like that, especially when it's in your summary, paints a very poor first impression.

7976284 Hey I know busy an all but when will the story continue?

Before I read this, what is the Gore, and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

p.s. Sex ?

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The gore and dark tag is mainly focused on when they see the setting Doom guy is in.

The sex tag is for the nudity that is spotted in the story

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when will there be a update to the story?

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I would have already updated this story but last month I lost all of my progress I did on it and now having trouble reweighting it

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Don't you mean rewritten.