• Published 13th Sep 2016
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28 Pranks Later: Twilight's Transmissions - Sparrow9642



The joke cookie filling scent has plagued Ponyville, but what happened in the following 28 days? Twilight recorded her experience within the following days, and the results were the following.

Comments ( 22 )

What a way to finish the story.

9440941
Hope you enjoyed :)

9440956
I did. It was worth the wait.

9441010
I got to enjoy a Superbowl win and to read the final chapters.

And the final curtain draws to an end, this magnificent story finally reaching a good close. I enjoyed reading it, even with the few mysteries still in place. Thank you for the ride. :twilightsmile:

9441573
I intended to keep the mysteries open. What RD exactly became, where she is in the end, who created the virus and why, the fact that Twilight died and yet, she was found alive as a monstrosity, and the fear that if she is never found, Equestria could be entering a plague of hellspawn, are all things I wanted to keep open for a good sense of fear.

I'm happy you enjoyed the conclusion :twilightsmile:

Can Rainbow Dash still fly? I was guessing she would go to her idols first and infect them with the virus one by one or even go to a nearby town or infect those who are passing by near Ponyville.

I kinda skipped to the end of 28 Pranks Later: The Aftermath (have mixed feelings about it in general), but, If Twilight committed suicide at the end of The Aftermath, then why was she alive here, up until she got killed? It feels like a continuity error.
Also: Oh. So the cookies don't turn ponies into zombie ponies... they turn them into monster ponies.

9763633
That is a continuity error on my part, but it never specified how exactly she was killed, so it is and isn't at the same time.

9763990
I see.
And as for the cookies turning ponies into monsters, I give you props for originality. Seriously, zombies created by diseases are so played out.
Now, If I can actually read this whole story, I'll be sure to post another comment here about what I think about it. Although, I can say I have mixed feelings about it, so far.

9763633
These are Twilight's recordings of her before she committed suicide.

:facehoof: I'm so stupid. I could've read this instead of wait two weeks to hear the audio version. But hey! I was on the live chat (Rainbow Dash is Best Pony. You know, the one who wouldn't SHUT UP DURING THE ENTIRE THING)!

9887774
But then it wouldn't have been as fun ;)
Yes I do remember you lol

9887853
Yeah. The readings on YouTube are always so much better than the actually thing. The sound effects, emotion, background sound, etc.

Haha :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Was just about to let you know this story had a youtuber reading, but then I remembered you read it XD

So Twilight was mutating in a similar way to RD?

Did she inject herself too?

Hybrid dragon rainbow dash could be its own creepypasta

10515670
Ok she didn't, but considered it

9763633
My theory is she attempted to commit suicide but wasn't fully dead and the virus kept her alive and if the virus is anything like the 28 Days Later virus then it's tough to kill those infected with the virus without being infected yourself because they have a high amount of endurance pain tolerance so I wouldn't be surprised if she failed at committing suicide because her body just resisted it long enough for the virus to keep her alive

9763633
I reread the last part that was kind of confusing in the birth story before the sequel

A noise in the distance erupts among the quiet town, the sound of numerous bones shattering, and blood leaking from open wounds.

I think I figured out what the Creator meant to do here a noise erupts from the distance could easily be a number of things that could have killed her since it said that she had to be terminated at least in the transmission story so theoretically speaking she could have been shot with a gun she could have been killed with spells with her body crashing into a wall which is why we're hearing a cracking sound of Bones and blood leaking from open wounds again could be caused from injuries he received while they were attempting to terminate her they succeed

11262090
She was shot to death after becoming a hostile threat to the team who had eventually come to her aid.

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