Paradox, as he goes by now, was once an normal human being. After many horrible events on earth and in the universe around it he finds himself in Equestria much like The Doctor. By this point Paradox is 3642 years old and no matter what happens his "Perfect" body refuses to die and regenerates no matter the injury, even vaporization. Now this strange and powerful immortal will have to help protect his new home without being banished or annihilating the population. Adventure, shipping, and strange behavior ensues.
Chapters (13)
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HA. always wanted to do that. well anyways great job, you get a favorite and a rate up from me!
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I appreciate it, thanks a ton! I was really worried tbh cause this is my first real foray into fanfiction in any sense but now to quote Boar Thrills:
"This is a huge boost to my Morale!" +10 Morale
This story sounds great. Just curious, but you compared his arrival to the arrival of the doctor and say he is also made from a timelord. Will the doctor also be in this story? I haven't been able to guess from twilight's reaction to him revealing he was made into a timelord due to how close to the end it was stated.
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Yes actually Dox has history with the Doctor and not all of it good mind you and he will be showing up often but not usually as a main comrade more of a "Paradox why must you break down the door to my clock shop everytime you need the tardis" kind of way. There is also a lot more to his timelord transformation like how his regenerations are different and he never looked into the untempered schism but has seen into the void and etc...
Also thanks for the fav.
BRILLIANT! haha. Just brilliant. ITs hard to find a Funny "Comedy" Based HIE. And brilliant explination of the pinkie void! And i am hoping to see more Pinkie and Paradox Random moments. !
You have my FULL Support and Recomendation. You sir, Are a true Comedy Author. Keep it up! Just plain out BRILLIANT.
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Suddenly his ego grew three sizes that day.
well...maybe one and a half.
So...He's a Time Lord than can Regenerate an infinite number of Times?
He'd better have a TARDIS...
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Yes and no, His regenerations are different than the Doctor and as for his own tardis to quote River Song: "Spoilers"
A simple bartenders outfit? Soooooo, a tuxedo?
if so, i like this guys style!
Brilliant as usual. Love it, NOT A SINGLE SPELLIN ERROR!
Keep it up! 
817569 Haha. Sorry about that, It was the best fanfiction that ive seen for months.
I'm not very picky when it comes to errors.
DOWN WITH THE GRAMMAR NAZI'S.
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Yep, Actually the first style for Paradox was gonna be something pretty steampunk with like a Captain Jack time travel wrist band thing but I then I thought why not make him a badflank that can seem sophisticated. Also costume changes won't be a foreign concept here thats for sure.
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Thanks for the praise I try my best to make sure everything is correct before I post on both my text edit and on the site. If I don't I feel like I have failed my High school english teachers.
hehehehehe
Woah! Paradox trying to kill Doctor Who?
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Don't ya just love a good cliffhanger full of emotion mostly this >
A creature is roaming around the abandoned town of Los Soledad, aging everything it touches at an accelerated rate. When Ben, Gwen, and Kevin investigate, they meet Paradox, a scientist from the 1950s who was sucked into the event horizon of his time-travel experiment. Displaced from time and space, Paradox has existed for 100,000 years and is able to move through time at will. this is who paradox sounds like (ben 10 alien force)
ahhhhhhhhhh poor doctor how dare you paradox
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-Nods head- I like it.
mAke it stop! Hahahaha! MY SIDES HURT! "The asscrack of dawn" The whole outburst about dancing on hide! This is the kind of comedy i enyoy. (Monocle, Tophat and tux) Jolly good show chap.
Giggdy, perfectdas usual. Love the comedy involved, Keep up the great work. Dont let the haters drag you down.
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I Appreciate the love for secretly I am a changeling.
Don't judge! I think changelings are kinda cuuute.
In the beginning it reads:
"Using his statue as a pony, ..."
Is this a mistake or a misinterpretation on my part?
A few grammar mistakes but nothing too noticeable (grammar mistakes stick out to me so don't worry.) I loved that talk between Paradox and Luna about spending yhe night. That deserves a moustache:
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I love your avatar. You're caught up on Freeman's Mind on YouTube, right?
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Thanks for that, I fixed it to Stature and your second message says "spending yhe night." not the. Just sayin
Love the new chapter, The voices are more understandable,
Cheers, Mate.
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The voices get better with nightmare giving them strength kinda like how Rage took over when the deathapede grabbed Twi. Also like how I have to go rage at Fedex for losing my new brony shirts.
xD! Aw, Poor you.
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Not gonna lie the last part of the story was written in rage face. That equalled prison sentences and Ragedox.
Haha.
Wow, tough luck.
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Ehh at least I got a good idea from it. Sliver lining and all that.
A bit rushed, imo.
"who needs to breath" change to "breathe"
"magic was to dangerous" change to "too"
"they are to afraid" change to "too"
I still like the story even if I point out flaws (I do that to every fic so please don't hate me!
)
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Don't worry my friend. Pointing out my mistakes is only helping me, especially since I don't have an editor. Besides if everyone made everything perfect the first time, then we wouldn't be human.
So... Heartwarming? Never had this feeling before... Good for you you helped learn how to feel this!
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Everypony loves a family reunion... and violence... makes the feels go haywire! What fun!
yaaaaaaaaay!!
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I see your Yay and raise you a Huzzah!
In tears of hapiness and joy...
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Wow, coincidence...
My name is Gus, with a sister called Charlotte...
MINDREADER!!!!1111
-Jorofrarie
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That is actually an interesting coincidence. In truth they are named after my main WoW character Gustus (Warlock) and his RP sister Charlotte (My mage). Their names have changed now though.
934555 Sure they are...
I've got my eye on you mister!
-Jorofrarie
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My good sir I may be a changeling but I assure you I am nothing If not a gentlecolt.
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934594 You sir have a good taste in moustaches, have another...
And you're a changeling? Cool. Am I you say? *Coughs nervously* Nope.avi, not at all...
-Jorofrarie
Ok I love this story, but one thing bothers me. This feels like an abridged version at several points especially any of the romance.
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I know where your coming from on that and the reason is I needed to introduce Charlotte first so I could have the romance stories run parallel. As for why I won't spoil that.
sup gais?!?!?!
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Oh hai der!
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