Guardians

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Angel767

Angel767 #1 · Aug 23rd, 2016 · · · Chapter one ·

I am intrigued
keep going good sir or madam

in terms of gramar everything is good as far as i can see

Tyrfang

Tyrfang #2 · Aug 23rd, 2016 · · · Chapter one ·

7505741 Hell, as long as someone likes it, I'll keep going. Thanks, bro. :D

Zap Apple Smash

Zap Apple Smash #3 · Aug 25th, 2016 · · · Chapter one ·

This has potential. I'm interested to see where this goes. I love stories that expand on the lore of Equestria and I also really like the idea of the earth ponies being tied to the titans of greek mythology.

Though one question regarding the discription.

The third monster was
//////////////////////////////// The two fillies were bound to these creatures, or, rather, the creature were bound to the fillies.

Was the unfinished sentence and the slashes intentional or was there meant to be something else in there?

Tyrfang

Tyrfang #4 · Aug 25th, 2016 · · · Chapter one ·

7509471 Intentional. Yeah, the name will be announced during the founding of said monster, but the name itself has been lost to time. Only the Sisters and the other two know the name of the third for now.

Phantom Night