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Cherish the thought.

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The independent nation of Pinery is just that: Independent. Separate. Self-sufficient. Princess Celestia respects this, which is why when their head chef disappears without a trace, she sends three bright young members of her royal guard to settle some nerves.

On paper, the team makes a lot of sense: Captain Minerva the Brave, a stalwart pegasus with enough brawn to make up for her brains; Lieutenant Terrain, a cunning earth pony with enough brains to make up for his brawn; and Foghorn, who is determined not to screw it up for the other two.

Together, these three friends embark on a polite and respectful security mission to Castle Pinery. Together, they'll discover that just because it’s hard to keep secrets behind wooden walls, that doesn’t mean they aren’t there to be found.

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Comments ( 12 )

Interesting....

I'm intrigued by this Minerva the Brave, instantly lovable, hope to see more of her!

Ooh... Liking it so far! Your dialogue is absolutely wonderful, and now I'm really curious.
More please?

Ha! It's so awkward and I love it!

If Minerva, Terrain, and Foghorn were voiced, what would they sound like? Does Foghorn sound like Foghorn Leghorn?

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Correct! And Minerva would have the same voice as Minnie Mouse, while Terrain would be voiced by Terry Crews.

I really hope there will be more of these guys. For such a serious story, they’re a riot.

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Has it really been over 2 years since I last updated this? :twilightsheepish:

I'll keep it in mind. I've always known how it ends, it's just about getting the words down. Maybe in the new year.

Thanks for stopping by :heart:

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