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"All it take is a beautiful smile to hide an injured soul" - Robin Williams

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This story is a sequel to The Phoenix


It has been about 6 years now since Philomena came back home from running away. When she see's birds with their families in the trees she wonders where her family has gone and goes on an adventure to find them, but comes home to find a tragedy.

Now with a reading by Lotus Moon!

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Edited and proofread 11-9-16 by atronosthelast

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Comments ( 10 )

Another heartwarming story. Great work.

7624730 I'm working on my First MLPEG fic.

7624993 Best of luck with that.

7625462 I submitted it, but its still being processed.

7625467 I'll try and keep an eye out for it.

7625478 Its a bit messed up and rushed, but its only cus i get excited.

A lot better than the fic before, I must say! Though you still suffer with infuriatingly short chapters, the quality of the writing is nearly there. You need to vary the sentence lengths and need to just watch out for your speech a bit, you're stil formatting it a little wrong. If you could get an editor, though, these minor issues would be easy to iron out! (P.S. if you can't find one, I'd be happy to give the fic a look over)

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'K. Do you have gDocs?

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