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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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Well done, it's nicely written,
even if you can't connect with the characters because the slice of Life scenes move to fast.
My biggest issue with it currently is that he keeps bring established as OP and then bring beaten in one chapter.
But those are my only complaints that aren't nitpicking so good damn job.
P.S.
Everything feels a tad rushed, take time and read it out loud to set pacing better, people generally like quality over quantity.
200 words of gold is better than 200,000 of bull*$#@
I know u said it wasn't but this seems a lot like wolf among ponies
Ikr that's what I was thinking