Dusk Shine has become the newest Alicorn of the realm of Equestria. His sister Gleaming Shield decides to grab him before any other mares can. Clopfic. Rule 63, incest, impregnation, mild comedy bits.
“Just one,” Gleaming said, attempting to deadpan but lacking the energy to do so. Then she blinked, and realised what had caused her to black out. “Well, you did it, Dusky. You finally made me cum so hard I blacked out.”
“Aw, shucks,” Dusk said, rubbing his head with a hoof. “That isn’t necessarily a good thing, you know. Blacking out could be associated with low blood sugar levels, or-”
Gotta love our little twilights no matter how they come out
Hahahah... why do I get the feeling one or more of the family was listening in on these two and their roughhousing? I feel like somepony may have been peakin in on them.
7444624 The more things change, the more they stay the same. Even when she's a stallion who is sexually dominant in bed, good ol' Twilight is still a dork
7444950 That feeling when I seem to write better comedy bits on my clopfics than on non-clop
7444973 Dusk made sure to use a soundproof spell and basically put up lots of privacy. Everyone still knows what's going on up there though
7445032 7445053 This fic isn't about clop. It's about the rise and fall of Gleaming Shield's dignity, as she goes from calm, composed Captain of the Royal Guard to somepony regularly teased about her sex life and turned into Fluttershy 2.0
7445260 So? They have 2 Alicorns with them and one of them apparently has an Astral Plane to watch everything that happens in Dusk Shines life. They could have just gone there to watch.
Gotta love our little twilights no matter how they come out
oh god, this is fuck great, story i want to see part though the pregnancy and maybe 10 year later
I wanted to say that!
Hahahah... why do I get the feeling one or more of the family was listening in on these two and their roughhousing?
I feel like somepony may have been peakin in on them.
Nice job man! :D
Oh, I know what teasing is left - somepony teasing a preggy Gleaming!
Oh geez, even Spike had it figured out. Poor Gleaming is going to catch fire if all this teasing gets any worse.
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Glad to see that, hahaha.
Trollestia is fun
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Nope, it is most certainly a very cute Gleaming Shield I loves it!
7444624 The more things change, the more they stay the same. Even when she's a stallion who is sexually dominant in bed, good ol' Twilight is still a dork
7444950 That feeling when I seem to write better comedy bits on my clopfics than on non-clop
7444973 Dusk made sure to use a soundproof spell and basically put up lots of privacy. Everyone still knows what's going on up there though
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7445053 This fic isn't about clop. It's about the rise and fall of Gleaming Shield's dignity, as she goes from calm, composed Captain of the Royal Guard to somepony regularly teased about her sex life and turned into Fluttershy 2.0
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: Silly human, I can dispell those~
: Its true.
7445260 So? Stern, highly decorated and successful Captain of the Guard into a Broodmare still counts, doesn't it?
... plus, I like the idea of a preggy Gleaming.
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So? They have 2 Alicorns with them and one of them apparently has an Astral Plane to watch everything that happens in Dusk Shines life. They could have just gone there to watch.
I'm really hoping to see dusks friends reactions since rainbow was the one who told him to find a mare
Maybe we can have a 6-8 month time skip called The Mane 6 tease Gleaming?
A well-written incest clopfic with bdsm roleplay. Good sir, this is a criminally underrated fic. Bravo, I congragulate you on your performance.
10/10
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Hell I knew it - once you start with using "anyways" "partways" that "a ways" is certainly coming too.