I'm kinda bummed it's only two more chapters. I really want a full sized story about this, it's so good!

arm race of who can make most alicrons, lol

Cadibitch

Hahahah, ooooh lordy Cady, you silly alicorn.
This is funny as all hell, nicely done!

WHAT IF EVERYONE WAS RELATED CAUSE CELESTIA AND LUNA POPULATED THE WORLD AND LIKE ALL INCEST

soooo wait, if they do have foals they will be alicorns? but celestia and luna buried theirs? im confused.....

7444569 looks like it might be that Celestia and Luna have the Immortal trait but it doesn't guarantee that an Alicorn has that trait

I kind of wonder if something went missing there. Celestia and Luna didn't have alicorn foals... so what's guaranteeing Cadance and ShinyGleaming will have alicorn kids?

7442453 I did consider more, but figured what I had would be sufficient before I got tired of writing it. Even here, the two clop chapters are buffered by non-clop short bits with some gags and comedy. Possibly more in the future, but that's not a guarantee (I have a lot of pairings I'd love to write, and genderbent Shining Sparkle is just one of many).

7443174 I think I swiped that joke, actually. From myself. If I actually had a main account that was for non-clopfics, that is.

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To answer this question, it's mentioned somewhat in the text but not outright, only Celestia and Luna are capital I immortal in this story, or else you'd obviously have an end point of overpopulation. Alicorns (probably) live longer than average, and aging spells lose effectiveness over time as well, but everypony else bites the dust sooner or later.

“Which company has stationary manufacturing as part of its portfolio?” -- stationery

Cadance promised. “So what’s the scoop, girl? How did it start? Were you each in a hurry one day and only had one shower, and had to share? Did you literally run into him and fall head-over-plot? Was it a slow-burning thing where you slowly realised you loved each other, like loved-loved?”

I would like to know how was their first time too .

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Maybe they were mortal alicorn goals? I dunno.

As soon as he was gone, Cadance immediately turned around, and her and Gleaming Shield suddenly dropped to the floor.

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The first one here might easily go under vernacular, but the second one IMHO should be changed.

"Me and Bluey would like to try for one soon,

Her and Luna had foals thousands of years ago,

Well, that, and Auntie isn’t quite as subtle with her hints as she thinks she is.

Oh? I suspect she's exactly as subtle as she thinks she is.

Sword of Damarecles.... Him I love the.... Greek mythology there sorry played to much Ryse Son of Rome

And Blueblood is actually competent that is amazing!!