James and his little sister Maiya currently live in their town's orphanage, fortunately, their town's policy towards sibling adoption requires the adopter to take in all of them. That way, the children are not forced to part.
On their way back to the orphanage from a bookstore, they end up stuck in an infinite loop and are unable to get out. A mysterious man appears before them, the cause, and offers a deal, he will find them a good person who wants to adopt them.
He left out the part about a new, dangerous world full of monsters and other evils, and the siblings turning into Metal Bat and his little sister Zenko.
Chapters (6)
Please continue i have been waiting for a story like this just look what my account name is called
Please tell me this is really about Metal Bat and his sister
7427815 I am many things, a liar isn't one of them. This is not about the actual Metal Bat, as I do not know his real name. Otherwise I'd use him instead.
7427848 haha ok
My God. And here I thought I was the only one whose favorite character was Metal Bat. Here I thought I was the only one absolutely transfixed by the amazing Garou vs. Metal Bat fight. I'm not alone.
Liked, fav'd, followed.
7428809 Yup, Metal Bat is my favorite in OPM. Cannot wait to see it animated if season 2 follows the Garou arc, it'll be mind blowing I'm sure.
Where's an adamantium bat when you really need one?
Ugh yes! Metal Bat so OP! Also the comedic gold here adds a nice touch.
7437363 Thanks, glad you like it
Should rather like to see this continue.
So awesome
good job
You should try getting it into your head a bit more, see how far you can go with it.
7851220 I really should, it's the only time I can motivate myself to actually write.
Yes, yes, yes. I was wondering about this story. Good to see it's not dead. Let's crack some skulls.
Another one, so soon? My birthday isn't for several months!
7863975 Ah, should I wait a few months for the next chapter then?
Metal Bat? Zenko? Are they characters from the One Punch Man manga? Metal Bat seems familiar. And is this in the same dimension as your one punch man displaced?
7869453 Yes, they are characters from One Punch Man. And kinda.
7869460 lol Kinda? Are they in the same timeline or not? XD If they are but in different locations, that's fine. And if they're not and the dimensions they're in are just similar, that's fine too.
7869465 Depends on how you view the mirror portal I guess.
7869825 Ah. So, basically, same cluster of dimensions, but this one is in Sunset's world, while the other is in Equestria. Right?
7869864 Yeah basically. Both stories start at different times in the series, this one for example starts when Sunset first enters the mirror
7870778 Dang. Many years prior, eh?
7870797 Lol yeah
Another good one keep it up
Metal Bat and his little sister Zenko are from One Punch Man, right?
7894753 Aye
are they the Terrance and Phillip from south park?
7894924 Haha nah, that was just a happy accident. I didn't even realize the name similarity until I was about to publish.
I can haz crossover?
7895502 Sorry, not looking for one just yet.
7895570 that's cool, can I make reference to the bat?
7897954 Sure, knock yourself out.
7897971 hehe...pun.
A Displaced that has had a token made without their knowledge?
*steeples fingers*
Excellent.
>>Please Update...
hey,im loving this!
also,try listening to these to help you in writing more
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m4LrW5f4dyc
and
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8wEi0WK93X4&spfreload=5
anywho,hope you write more chapters for this,its super interestting
More!
Hmmm, wonder if dead or just in a haitus/witer's block period.
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Just waiting until season 2 comes out next year before I start writing again.
I'm hoping you'll eventually continue this, even if I'm not a big fan of the Displaced genre, your writing is good enough that I thoroughly enjoyed what you have written so far.
Although part of that enjoyment may stem from the fact that you decided to use literally anyone other than Saitama from the OPM franchise. Metal Bat was a great pick!
Thanks for making another chapter I'm glad it's back
As Doctor Frankenstein would say: "It LIIIIIVES"
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Pardon my boldness, but, most respectfully, it's pronounced frahnk-en-steen.
I saw an update on Fimfic just now and I didn't think too much of it until I saw exactly which story had updated and then I was all like:
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Wow, it is so good to see this story back again! And with a very attention-grabbing chapter no less, that had some solid world-building in it, a cooldown period from the last chapter's action and the introduction of two unexpected MLP characters!
Quick question:
Based on the city names (and it's entirely possible that I'm forgetting the details that you mentioned in earlier chapters), but is the world James and his sister in, an exact copy of the OPM World? Complete with the super continent and extra moons.
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
An exact copy? Kind of yeah but that's because EQG doesn't have a map of its world (I think, I haven't paid attention to the shorts). The world is a supercontinent but I decided on only one moon. The city names are basically the same as OPM just because it'd be kinda annoying to give each one its own unique name, although I give it some flavor by having districts within those cities be named after Equestrian things (like the Canterlot district James lives inside in City-D).
this shit mad good