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Artemis Noctem


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A young Draconequus/dragon hybrid has had a cruel life in the Dragon Empire. However,his life changes when he meets a young princess.
This takes place in my version of the kilalaverse. I admire her work a lot.
Also note that this story is told from the Draconequus/dragon hybrid's point of view from two years ago.
Heres a bio of the two OC that this story centers on. This is a bio of them in present times,so their age is reduced by two in this story. https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Princess+Artemis/blog

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

I have to say, for a first story, it wasn't that bad! When I finished reading I thoroughly enjoyed the plot, and it left me wanting more! Good job!

7421226 i second this notion and may i say i am intrigued to read more you get an up thumb already please keep this story alive

Will do, thanks for the kind words :pinkiehappy:

I say, you have my attention. This is quite the intriguing story. Keep going, I'd like to see where this is headed.

Although, the description could do without the bios. My suggestion would be to put the bios in a blog then, put a link to the blog in the description.

P.S, you can ignore the stuff below if you wanna


BTW, you could put some contrast in the story
Eg.

I used my [insert limb here] to [action done]
I folded my [type of wings eg. draconic/feathered] against my [colour of body] body

You've got me hooked.

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