I am a master of self-inserts and self proclaimed lover of Rainbow Dash, I'm also cringe as fu-
Sweetie Belle, accidentially kills a classmate in the dead of night on a walk home, her hands are stained with the blood of a pony she's known for years... what is she to do?
Who does she turn to?
On that dark night... she gets her answer...
I think I really like writing out Sweetie Belle, and I have no idea why.
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Make it a series
Please make this a series! Please please PLEASE! I will favorite this right now so I can keep a close watch of this!
I'd like to see something more to this. Perhaps not a series, although that would be wonderful, but another one shot some time down the line or maybe showcasing Sweetie's training in the Dark Brotherhood, who may be fellow members, and so on.
We all have characters we love writing for. Chrysalis is one of mine, Sweetie Belle yours. One reason I can see enjoying writing her is that she is seemingly so innocent, but I think it's bleeding hilarious to write her with an incredibly dark or morbid personality.
A couple of more chapters couldn't hurt, friend.
It's a shame Sweetie's so young and naive but that was exactly what the dark brotherhood mare was banking on. Nopony could blame for what was a very clear-cut case of self-defense at worst. Of course there would be some doubt due to Sweetie's own lack of injuries but there is still almost no way Sweetie would be punished for Rumble's death but unfortunately Sweetie doesn't know that.
I'd like to see this continue just to see where you go with it.
PLEASE MAKE A SERIES I absolutely love this and would love anotherone
For me, it's Princess Celestia. I like showing her as a sensitive person who's prone to getting just as upset as anypony.
I vote for a series. I really hope that we can see what happens to her, and especially what that knife means for her.
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Now, who will oppose this menace?
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A full story is needed here not just a series
Woo! Another dark series enters Fimfiction. Me wonders if it'll become popular. If it does, I was here in the beginning. Totally called it.
7748668 Dude the thieves guild and the dark brotherhood work together.
7748840 ...Or do they?
Holy pasta balls on a cheese cracker
all those comments and faves...
You guys make me happy~ :happy:
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I'm shocked.
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I might contemplate it later on, I honestly didn't expect so many people to like it that much
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That idea does tickle my fancy, and honestly I considered it when I was writing this. Sort of a start to a short little thing about Sweetie's journey throughout the Dark Brotherhood. So maybe there just might be some more, we'll see.
I do love Chrysalis, she's so cool and her voice is umph~ And yeah that could be one of the reasons, it is hilarious to write her that way, hahaha
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Indeed it wouldn't. hehe
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Yep! She did just that, she was a prime candidate to bank on in this situation. Poor Sweetie, hohoho.
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I might make it a series, stay tuned later on.
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We just might, I have a lot of other stuff on my plate at the moment but I'll consider it for later on down the road. So stay tuned
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It just might become a full story, who knows. We'll see my friend, we'll see.
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But good on you for calling it, hahaha.
I doubt it'll become popular
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*Subtly takes and plans*
Thank you all for commenting, favoriting and watching, I'm glad you enjoyed this story and who knows, maybe we'll see a full story down the way. One can only hope! Stay tuned folks, and thanks again!
7749392 Hey, if you don't decide to expand on it, could I? This idea is just too interesting to pass up (I died when I read the Dark Brotherhood. I love Skyrim, okay?) and in my opinion it NEEDS to be continued one day.
If you give me your blessing, then I'll give you credit for the original idea. If not, that's fine too.
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I love Skyrim as well, but Oblivion is my most favorite one if I'm being honest.
And wow, you'd continue this? First time anyone's ever offered that. I am genuinely curious to see how you would go about writing it and the direction you would take it in... and a quick look on your page you'd probably update it faster then I could...
Call me curious... very.
7749523 The story I'm updating right now is one I've been working on for a while and have a good chunk of it already written, so I actually COULD update it pretty fast. I don't think it would be too long, just long enough.
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Hmm... I might have to think for a little bit on this, as I am a tad bit nervous about the whole thing...
7749554 That's fine. You can PM me anytime and let me know.
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Cool.
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Community Gif? I like you already
7751581 I'm sorry, I have no idea what the Community is, I just pulled that off of Google. Sorry to disappoint.
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Hahaha, its alright, its just a funny show about community collage.
Its hella funny and the character in the GIF Is a favorite of mine.
please have sweetie belle become the listener
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Something'll happen, you'll see.
THIS NEEDS TO BE A SERIES
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There's a good chance of that happening at some point
When is the real question, hohoo
Oh My God, please excuse me while I forever combine MLP and The Elder Scrolls....auugh!!
This was so super good. I love dark stories ^___^
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Hahaha, its a damn good crossover, there's a group on here with some Elder Scrolls stories in it if you wanna read more of them.
And thanks!
Glad you enjoyed, haha
What is this a crossover of?
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look at my comment below to MentallyUnstable
Omg I love this, I love spinoffs and crossovers. ^^
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Hehehe, it's not really a spinoff, it's most certainly a crossover! But not a spinoff
But thanks!
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