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This story is a sequel to Pieces of a Grey Cloud
What if Derpy asked herself all the questions everypony did, but never came up with an answer? Was it hope, true love, or just a cloud she saw in a dream? The liminal, horizons, the ineluctable modality of the visible. Join us in a romp thru the brain of Equestria's favorite grey bubble-butt!
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This is so sad. Da FEELZ!
BTW, thot is actually spelled thought. Because I AM THE GRAMMAR-NAZI!
7406494 spelling and grammar are separate disciplines. i use 'thot' as an application of advanced semiotics. but thanks for the advice! and for the comment. :)
Oh. Well, I feel stupid.
7406693 it's okay, common mistake. have a hug!
I have no idea what Rainbow Dash having blue eyes means, but I'm sure it's something.
Reading through this while in a haze myself seems like the right thing to have done.
I am fine with Dinky being her 'daughter', but should Derpy have really just given up on trying to get her back like that? Everything else is done well, I guess, it's just that one thing that I feel is unresolved.
Her what? This pops up a few times, but seeing how scattered it is throughout the story it likely is just a mistake to fix.