1: Suddenly Predators. This is all going extremely fast. Like, abysmally so. Slow down, I’m completely confused as to what is going on, expecting the next chapter to continue from the last only for it to skip ahead. You need to stop, stop skipping. Take it slow, there’s no rush to finish the story.
2: Predators don’t take their masks off for no reason, as they wear them for important reasons. The only reason a Predator would take their mask off is if theirs is damaged and they’re replacing it, or they’re performing the rite of passage, which is only done by young predators performing a hunt.
3: The ponies wouldn’t recognise the Xenomorph as aliens. Ponies do not know there is such a thing as extraterrestrial life, it’s at best speculation. It’s not like the Human Race where we have a tonne of theories relating to the existence of alien life, the ponies have never been to space save Luna and maybe Celestia and as such would assume the Xenomorph is from somewhere on the planet unless there was evidence pointing to them being extraterrestrial. Like, a spaceship.
4: Celestia and ponies in general would not exploit young to gain the upper hand. They would not dissect the eggs. Hell, they wouldn’t take the eggs in the first place.
5: Not very smart, creating chestbursters with no plan to clean up the mess. Dumping the cleanup duty onto the newly birthed chestbursters is extremely foolish.
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So now a Predator is gonna show up?
7564724 Yep
Where is the war of shadows from?
7565010 https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285238/nightmare-breach-the-war-of-shadows
7571080 Eh kind of
7571080 what kind of story?
7644230 really spooky anyways its been awhile how are you.
When is the next chapter coming out?
7652535 not sure because im in a writer's block but I'll let you know of any updates on the story.
1: Suddenly Predators. This is all going extremely fast. Like, abysmally so. Slow down, I’m completely confused as to what is going on, expecting the next chapter to continue from the last only for it to skip ahead. You need to stop, stop skipping. Take it slow, there’s no rush to finish the story.
2: Predators don’t take their masks off for no reason, as they wear them for important reasons. The only reason a Predator would take their mask off is if theirs is damaged and they’re replacing it, or they’re performing the rite of passage, which is only done by young predators performing a hunt.
3: The ponies wouldn’t recognise the Xenomorph as aliens. Ponies do not know there is such a thing as extraterrestrial life, it’s at best speculation. It’s not like the Human Race where we have a tonne of theories relating to the existence of alien life, the ponies have never been to space save Luna and maybe Celestia and as such would assume the Xenomorph is from somewhere on the planet unless there was evidence pointing to them being extraterrestrial. Like, a spaceship.
4: Celestia and ponies in general would not exploit young to gain the upper hand. They would not dissect the eggs. Hell, they wouldn’t take the eggs in the first place.
5: Not very smart, creating chestbursters with no plan to clean up the mess. Dumping the cleanup duty onto the newly birthed chestbursters is extremely foolish.