Trixie was looking forward for her cruise trip on her summer vacation, but was ruined the moment she met up with a member of the Rainbooms and the Dazzlings and ended up on a trip with them. Just when her day couldn't get any worse, their ship was caught in a hurricane and then ended up stranded on a desert island. As Pinkie and Sonata were busy having fun, Trixie was determined to get herself off of this island without losing any more of her sanity.
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I'll definitely be watching this hilarious and marvelous piece!
Lol, this was pretty good. The dialogue was well-written and flowed well and the humor was great. The only criticism I have is that their were a little grammatical errors but not too noticeable. Good Job! I'll be keeping up with this!
7395201 Thank you so much! I promise you won't regret it!
7395356 Thank you very much! I appreciate your criticism!
Question: After reading this chapter, I like it. It makes me remember that skit from All That. Will Trixie hit herself in the head with a club or coconut to fall asleep?
7395742 You'll find out...on the next chapter!
You NEVER EVER say those words or you'll get Murphy'd!!!!
This is going to be pure hell for Trixie, while Sonata and Pinkie have the time of their lives. I'm going to like this.
Good start, I like how you mention Trixie is friends with Starlight in this world too.
Take out the I.
Either take out "only" or add "if" before it.
In other words
"do" anything
"Well" not "we'll"
I think you mean drown.
7420614 I'm glad you like it so far. Hope you stick around, because Trixie's road of hell is only the beginning!
And as usual, thank you so much for pointing out my mistakes. Even after I looked them over a few times, there's always a few I missed.
Ok this reminds me of Club SpongeBob.
This was a fun chapter. I loved the references to Spongebob. If this Trixie was a little nicer I might find her misery to be sad instead of amusing. I did notice a few small errors again though. But overall great job.
Actually, it was because of the storm they're stranded so it would be "thanks to" it. Also I think you mean "in" the ocean.
They don't have their phones so change have to had.
You mean doing nothing.
Would be easy.
Sleep long.
Replace have with "has" and put "it" after back.
This was another funny chapter! I almost feel bad for Trixie, but she brings it upon herself, lol! Aside from a few grammatical errors, nice work.
7441241 Fixed, thank you very much! I'm glad you like this chapter!
7441310 Thank you!
Karma's not letting you go just yet there Trix.
Is the island a jungle island or what?
*THEME PLAYS*HERE ON TRIXIE'S ISLE!!!!!
Enjoyed the Emperor's New Groove references.
Okay am I the only one seeing a sponge squarepants theme here
What kind of monkey?
Oh my God this chapter was great!
ENG refrences and hilarious Pinkie & Sonata antics.
Shall be waiting for more!
That is one evil monkey.
Glad to see you updating this story! It's hilarious!
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That he is, but he barely even started yet.
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Thanks! Up until recently, I had a writer's block and lost my motivation to write this story. Now I know what to write for the remainder of this story.
Hope you'll stick around!
Nice to see this story back after so long. I don't think Trixie's going to get off the island any time soon.
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Thank you SuperSonicHeroes! Trixie may be on the island for a while, but she's too stubborn to give up.
Poor girl.
Who bets Trixie wants Monkey's Brain?
Maybe Trixie has OCD.
And now I'm starting to hate that monkey.
How long until Trixie finally breaks down and loses her mind?
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Nah, Trixie just wants to get off of the island and away from Pinkie and Sonata as quickly as possible since they both drive her crazy.
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Pretty close my friend. I won't spoil anything, but lets just say... that Pinkie and Sonata will eventually push Trixie over her limit.
8318341 My honest first guess was she breaks down crying and goes through a deep depression.
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Or it could be worse.
I can imagine a scene where Trixie gets fed up with bob, she finds a rifle (or makes a weapon) and ammo on the beach and tries to hunt him down, with Pinkie and Sonata trying to stop her.
You got that scene from Johnny Bravo
Do you do art requests?
How long until Trixie breaks down crying and gives up?
I can't believe three chapters updated without me noticing. I need to catch up. Good try flying Trixie, but still not good enough. Of course the monkey wins at poker.
Did Trixie just get Snake killed? I guess it won't be much longer until Trixie snaps and tries hunting Bob down.
I recognize that scene from Johnny Bravo. I also think I've seen that ending scene from Dexter's Laboratory, all it was missing was Bob reading Of Mice and Men.
Does Trixie have a death wish?
She's better off swimming back to civilization.
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Yeah... except for the fact that sharks are swimming around near the beach, waiting for Trixie as their snack.
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I never said it was a good choice.
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Good point.
I have a feeling something will happen to Trixie that will screw up everything.
Could Trixie finally be having a change of heart?
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Stay tuned to find out!