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BlueColton


Watched the show. Joined the herd. Ponies on the mind. Veteran fanfic writer. ProfileArt provided by CoutnessMRose: https://www.deviantart.com/countessmrose/art/The-Well-859294420

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Unknown to the rest of Ponyville, a certain inhabitant is not who he seems. There’s an alien among them who has seamlessly blended into the population for years. Now it will take the combined efforts of Twilight Sparkle, Spike the Dragon, the Mane Six, and a certain C.I.A man tho track down the elusive extraterrestrial before the world comes to an end.

My first crossover.

The sex tag is for innuendo.

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Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Something tells me this is going to end badly, in a funny way. :rainbowlaugh:

7360647 What can you expect when ponies and aliens are involved? :rainbowderp:

I have high hopes for this story.

7360679 Thanks.
7360685 I will try not to disappoint.

Now I'm hungry for licorice.
Dammit.

Faved.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Ya got the American Dad humor good.
Good job for your 1st crossover.

This is going to be great. You're writing is almost spot on in comparison to American Dad, which makes it even better, plus the concept alone is brilliant. I eagerly await what may happen next...

7360732 :pinkiehappy:
7360883 Thanks. Comedy's a tough one. If this goes over well I might do a sequel. Ponies in Langely Falls?

7361050 "You're writing is ALMOST spot on in comparison to American Dad..." I was going for ALMOST! Goal accomplished!

Is the concept brilliant? Not sure. But it's definitely something I haven't done before. That's what makes it challenging. Thanks for the review. :twilightsmile:

Ok. Was not sure at first but this is looking really promising.

You've got the American Dad writing style down pretty well and the MLP characters feel good too.

Looking forward to more.

7361453 Oh no indeed.
7361919 Thanks. Will try not to disappoint.

Please tell me Roger is going to get beaten up by Rainbow Dash or at least some other pony.

The licorice thing is going to play into something soon, I can smell it... No wait, that's the popcorn I'm smelling. This is just too good. Glad to see Stan is as tactful and subtle as ever. Top notch writing, chief.

"I'M FED UP WITH THIS ORGASM!"

7382041 I wonder how many people will get that reference. Glad you're enjoying the show.

7382677 It's one of my favorite episodes. Of course I'm going to say it. With pride.

This is comedy gold already and kudos to you for capturing the personality of Stan.

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