FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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How in the hell do you manage to publish such large chapters two to four days apart?
About bloody time I've missed you
Nice to see the battle finally reach the climax, I liked the idea of the Yak battle mech armor, as much as it was funny in its description. I was honestly surprised that the Be Dark spirit was actually broken and was sent sulking back into its corner, I thought it was an interesting twist to the situation and to had have Fast having to deal with a danger without its support and can feel an obvious absence of it in his performance. I wonder if more effects of the Dark withdraw with further affect his battle performance and how Fast will deal with it. I though it was endearing to see that he was willing to bargain with it instead of leaving it alone to acknowledge that he needs it without letting it subsume him again. I was nice to finally see an other head of the institute and I think he is he's interesting enough so far as being a cold and calculating bastard with actual tactical knowledge and experience. It was interesting to see that Moebious had apparently significantly delayed the Institute plans by several decades some how with unknown means and limit their activities to the area. I wonder who are his agents that actually secretly fight them, they underground railway maybe? It's all interesting. I was happy to learn that my guess was right about Shift 3 being under Moevious' possession.
I must admit I can barely wait for him to get his stable free, especially shift 3. Just so we can all see their reactions to the socially awkward Colt being an alicorn breeding stud, with foals on the way, that can wipe out entire armies. Especially if they get to see him in action.
Oh ha ha very funny ms duck and cover it seems to have returned! And your little nerf gun isint with you. MWAHAHAHAHA welcome to my evi...*cough cough* fuck i hate when that happens, ive been waiting so long to say it and... Ya know what forget it. Get out.
Kinda curious about this "Project Knightfall" and wondering wether my thoughts on Fast being used to possibly resurrect the Real shroud are valid.
That was a bad ass chapter, with loads of good snuggly feels, and just the right amount of drama and to top it off a reference to one of my all time favorite FOE side stories. You are a genius, thank you for sharing it.
Foam dart gun gives +10 to explosives?....
Don't think i didn't notice the subtle reference to Fallout: Equestria - Duck and Cover fic
Hmm. Fast seems to be drawing incorrect conclusions. Mobius wanted all of shift 3. They missed Fast, and he got so angry he broke off, setting them far behind. Somehow I think Mobius isn’t as evil as we think. He was a tinkerer, he made bad choices, and did bad things, but he’s far apart from how the other heads sound. A further parallel to Big MT.
Oh god! I know that reference in the aurthor's notes.
I really like character development that Zed has gotten over the last couple of chapters. Made it very enjoyable catching up on those chapters all at once.
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Same thoughts. Want to see how this works out when he sees them all again. Dad being a doctor. I can see him having a wonderful time in exchanging information with Jade. And how is mom going to react when she finds out that her own father caused a lot of this.
Also side note.... how did the institute know when to assault? Did they hack the stable computers, or did they have someone on the inside... and remember in the chapter he work up.. the recording from the retired Steel Ranger... he knew Kellogg.
Just binged this fic from the beginning and was not dissaponted, not only that, but a captain hoers refrence too! You've outdone yourself Crazy, cant wait for more.
You know, I kind of hope with all of the magic experimentation he'll end up messing up Teleportation. A few stories I've read touched on the older MLP gens, and how all unicorns could use short range teleportation through open spaces using line of sight, which used very little magic and was called Blinking. One story put a twist where if a Unicorn overcharged their horn and then teleported it'd cause a localized explosion around them wherever they popped up, used almost exclusively for unicorn military in Urban combat before the Unification as it's rip apart anyone within a short distance of them, though it was also used as a safety measure for long distance or exploratory teleportation, the explosion being powerful enough to blow apart solid structures like walls, trees, or boulders so that the unicorn wouldn't end up stuck inside of a wall or impaled on something and dying.
I have no idea why I didn't think of this song and video sooner
That's going to probably set him off again
With all the betrayal that happened, unless you are planning something a bit different from the game (wouldn't complain to that) either way is going to be heartbreaking though
Someone that didn't get scared of the Shroud voice, interesting
Didn't see that coming
At first I was actually beinging reminded of the sentry bot in the Automatron dlc when you meet Jezebel
Love the similarities here
I myself was quite surprised when I got to Mobius and found out what he was doing
Sorry but I instantly thought of this⬇️
SAY WWWHHHHHAAATTTT?????
At least she follows, something I wish the npc enemies did I mean it makes having mines pointless when they don't actually go/follow you to the traps you set up. It is irksome.
That is such a fun weapon to have. Not indoors though.
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*Manic giggling* I loved that fic so much.
Holy shit! That would be terrifying... I LOVE IT!!!
Just imagining it made me shiver
From your friendly neighborhood brony, LB
Also love this reference... all it needs now is explosive darts 😉
From the one and only, LB
Spitting bullets are we? Awesome.
I understood that reference
These two are so adorable
This part tells us a lot about Klein
And there it is, Klein's goal, a goal that has been made impossible by the four first words of this quote "Means to an end".
Klein, just like Redeye, seeks to rebuild "Equestria" the utopia, the beautiful, vibrant and lively nation of "Equestria".
A nation built on the ideals of Kindness, Generosity, Laughter, Honesty, Loyalty and the Friendship and binds and elevates them further.
That's the "Equestria" Klein is trying to "rebuild", whether that "Equestria" ever truly existed or not is unimportant, what is important is that the thing he is trying to "rebuild" is something that is built on ideals, ideals that he is trampling all over.
What Klein (and Redeye) is trying to create is made impossible by the very methods he's using.
If you build a nation using Cruelty, Greed, Sorrow, Lies and Betrayal, then the very foundation of what is made will reflect that and the society that develops from it will grow into something terrible.
""The Ends justify the Means" is what the founders of our great nation believed in, and clearly that worked out great, so it's okay if we do it too."
This devolved into quite a bit of rambling, the point I'm trying to make is that Kleins goals are made impossible by the very methods he employes to try and achieve them
Honesty his goals would be more likely to be achieved if he had the Institute drop everything they're currently doing and start backing the Kingdom of Sanctuary wholeheartedly
He's good, he's not letting Fast think or respond before proceeding with the next point of similarity that he twists into something that is true yet also completely ignores the methods and context, making their motivations sound similar
Yeah, go Swan show that non-yak how a real (in her heart) yak smashes