FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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So for those of you who have read this so far how is the quality compared to project horizons
BIRD!!!! That is all...
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Well, if you mean quality of writing - its on realy good level, if you meant plot
basicly its moar on level of Fallout Eqestria, when Projest Horizons kinda goes to mutch anime style in last 2 Volums for me. Commonwelth story as a whole is realy realy good (For me its bether then orginal Fallout Eqestria tbh !) - specialy the way autor is using Fallout 4 plots and make them mutch moar deep and entertaining !
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Thats fine, while i dont feel it "got anime" it did have some killer emotional moments in the final volume. And if this is closer in quality to FoE proper i think ill give it a miss
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I feel that Commonwealth is a fair bit better compared to PH. That personally comes from there being less death of the main character, and less overall darkness. Yes Commonwealth has it's darkness but it's nothing when stacked against PH's darkness. Honestly, if I could wind back time, I would have stopped reading PH at Blackjack's first death and left it at that.
First of all: Glitter is best pony
Second: BIRD!
Third: That's right Mr. Times! Show that Brotherhood bastard what for!
fourth: Mobius reveal COMING SOON!!!!
Fifth: Yippee-ki-yay!!! Can't wait for more!!!! GIVE me more!!!!
Awesome update. I think your story is great, not as over the top as FE:NH and I like it.
Shit I read it all now I got to wait again
Cant wait to see what's inside the asylum
:( I have to wait to read more.
More fantastic work as always! I can't wait to see what you write next.
Aaaahh, reference to Heroes <3
I'm still mourning the death of Silver Storm...
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Eh, it felt real. So i didnt mind it. Also I'm not sure the deaths counted as real deaths
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Oh I love PH and wouldn't presume to put my story in the same league, so of course I don't see anything wrong with favoring Horizons and giving this a pass. Running through the original FoE and PH in no time is what inspired me to write at all, so even being mentioned along with either, or any of the big five for that matter, is amazing and I really appreciate the votes of confidence .
The deaths are one of the things I respect about Somber's work the most actually, I just can't bring myself to do the whole 'kill your darlings' bit, not just about writing in general (obviously), but in meaningful character deaths especially. I love anime already, so never minded any of the comparisons made to PH in that regard, I'd put it up there with Kill la Kill in terms of being so enjoyably, intentionally over the top there. Plus any story that can still make you feel raw, even if it's annoyed over characters you care about not getting a happy ending, is pretty damn good. I can only hope to reach a fraction of that kind of impact and longevity, especially since I came into the fandom late, but there are still plenty of great stories being put out and I'm sure you'll find one that fits better. May I suggest Longtalons as a recent one that had character deaths that were surprising and stung, along with Speak, Infinite Potential and Long Haul as ones I've been keeping up with and enjoying.
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While the modesty is great. I enjoy your story more that PH. It keeps me coming back for more.
Thank you for the great story. Can't wait for more.
I have read Fallout Equestria, Project Horizons, Pink Eyes, Lucky Number 7, and several other FOE type stories, mostly here on this site.
I have to dis-agree with most of the comments so far. I think both FOE: Commonwealth, and FOE: Fog Harbor are both to be ranked right up there with what the Author calls the 'Top Five'. I find the characters interesting and one can easily find one's self invested in them before something happens. Just like in FOE: PH. And like the original FOE, it's easy to like Fast Times, and follow along the emotional ride as he keeps getting into one situation after another, and then out of them.
It is good to see that Fast and the Shroud have at least come to some sort of agreement. That rampage, fueled by Glitter's supposed demise was DARK. Not that I am in any way pro-Covenant. I usually end up wasting Covenant in just about every game of Fallout 4 that I play, so Fast and the Shroud doing the same just does not shock me as much as it may others.
At least Fast didn't have to kill Dance, or Macson. And who knows what will happen with the Brotherhood's reactions to Fast in the future? If things parallel the game, Macson might eventually be on good terms with Fast and company, and the Commonwealth will finally be rid of the Institute forever.
As for you Crazyperson. Keep on writing! You have a nice fan base here and a good story going. One with twists and turns, plots and counter plots, and yes, the occasional 'dark' moment or two, or three. But this is too good a story to lay unfinished. So keep on writing... PLEASE.
just my thoughts,
the Frank Pony
this keeps getting better and better. so many twists and turns, so many feels and emotions! if fallout equestria had an official cannon, the commonwealth and fog harbor would be apart of it. i love your stories Crazyperson and i hope you keep up the amazing work!
Haha I absolutely loved the part were Fast woke up to a bunch of Mutant Alicorns the Shroud had dominated while he was asleep! Can't wait to see what else he gets up to now that he has more control over Fast's body!
These once-a-month+ updates are killing me.
Especially now that we are getting to the Asylum, this is one of my favorite Side Story lines.
The only one I like more is probably the Dunwich series
Woah, someone's competing for the longest FoE story.
Definitely one of my favorite moments in the game and you even made it better!!! HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE!!!!
Well done sir.
Damn I figured it be some big reveal twist but not that kind.
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Dunwich is freaky as hell. Both in 4 and 3
Wooo we are getting into my favorite side quest can't wait to see if "it" gets released :D