FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Watch out. This has potential to be sure, but the excessively long sentences make reading a chore.
Oh no! that pod was rigged!
Eh I like to think it was set that way lol maybe as a keyword or something but who knows onward to the next chapter lol
It is spelled as
but read as
So, I assume Better will be Father eventually? If so, bad form, dude. You shouldn't follow a plot point that obvious.
Hmm for a story I was expecting to Rip-off fallout 4 a bit from the description and picture. It's actually different I'll continue to chip away at this big lad as I can
Pretty damn enjoyable so far, looking forward to getting my teeth into this one!
Damn son!
Quite a nice start I put this on for tracking (mostly because I had recently played FO4 and was in the middle of reading FOE and was intrigued) I definitely need to catch up on this. I relate to Fast on SO many levels especially in social scenarios, mostly in high school though
I'm starting my own story in this universe and I was wondering if it's ok with you (and obviously fine if it's not) but would you mind if there are references to yours? (I'm actually still on the fence with it and only just getting my story off the ground but this is quite interesting
Also is anything like this going to happen? (or has happened)
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Just curious
Nice just discovered this looking through the longest stories. I like it going to dive deep
Really annoying in auto reader
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Dash dash dash dash dash
wow awesome story so far I'm really digging this
Excellent first chapter, the introduction of multiple characters through out the chapter was spot on. They were given enough time to feel like real charcters instead of through away emotions, seeing what happened to Grizz, sunset, his parents ect. Is gonna be a long haul.
Fast introduction was probably one of the smoothest introductions I've seen in awhile, not to much information but enough for us to start connecting with the character and get a feel for his personality.
The beginning itself was great, there is enough to connect it with the source game but not feel like a complete copy.
Very very few spelling errors or akward sentences. The pacing was nice as well, we got through a respectable cast of charcters, a bit of backstory, and the eventual malfunction without it feeling like it took to long or was rushed.
I'm late to the party for this story, but I will still comment here and there with thoughts or feed back. That first chapter alone has me optimistic that this will be a good story.
Alrighty then, let's get on with reading something new. I must say, revolving "shifts" of ponies is an innovative way to make resources last, most excellent.
Now let's see how it all fell apart. My bet's on raiders.
An interesting start, to be sure.
I first started this back in April of last year. I have since caught up and am now rereading an amazing story.
Way back in the before times, I downloaded this story and read it all. Now I'm back to boost your confidence and numbers. This story is very long, but I still find myself giddy going back to read it, as it's been long enough that I have forgotten much of it. TAKE TWO, ELECTRIC SCOOTALOO!!!
So far. AWESOME! TO THE NEXT!
So, I decided to read this again because I feel like I should’ve enjoyed it more when it was certainly still updating (even though this story is amazing). Now that I’ve beaten Fallout 4, I can understand where all this story is coming from.
When it comes to the Stable, I mean, I understand Vault 111’s ‘social experiment’, but Stable 111’s seems to make more sense. I’m not sure if the zebras were involved in the creation of Stable-Tec like the Chinese were in Vault-Tec. Regardless, this is an actual social experiment.
Also, when you know the rest of the story, this opening chapter gets very sad.
Alrighty, time to start on this monster of a story. I'm very interested to see how this utilizes FO4 content and how it either follows or diverges from that source material.
First chapter was great. I'm loving all the characters so far. Heres to hoping they don't all meet the same fate as the inhabitants of Vault 111 from the game... damn, the next chapters going to hurt me, isn't it...
Welp time to get started on a long one
FEAR
Im afriad to read that everypony is dead but at the same time so curious ;-; I'm sure it'll be fine! Nothing can be more sad then Murky Number Seven. This'll be great
Decided to come back and do a re-read of this awesome story. Just the other day I started to re-play Fallout 4 and made me remember this. I hope this gets updated someday as I'd love to see this finnished.
I appreciate the recontextualization of the fallout 4 vault for this story. I feel like a lot of authors forget that unlike vault tec, stable tec was in fact not a sinister, malicious, conspiracy (and a part of the pre-enclave web or corporations, likely one aimed at testing a variety of conditions for long term space travel), and did in fact did want to help ponies.
Oh boy, our protagonist is going into his own extra special pod on account of his own fuckups, I see no way that this could lead to him being the only surviving pony when an outside element sabotages the icebox, or when the icebox fails over the next shift, no sirree.
Third time rereading this story again, still as amazing every time. I try to reread it once a year, I hope crazy is okay somewhere out in this world and that someday they'll be back.
Once more I am reminded just how amazing this story is, and how sad I am that it was never finished.